七夕私語云跡 <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">窗外，有夏蟲低語</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">說著關(guān)于愛情的日子</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">曠世傳說似雨季淡煙</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">美且朦朧</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">可是啊可是</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">人間無奈，你可見</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">有多少癡情囚</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">徘徊在銀河邊</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">猶如隔岸的兩顆星星</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">流水帶著往事一去不返</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">時(shí)光外，是誰</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">依舊在編織美麗的傳說</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我站在此岸看彼岸風(fēng)景</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">有人站在橋上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">影子落在水中</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">鏡花水月，千古皆空</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我能否參透這個(gè)空字</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">有人起舞，風(fēng)聲如歌</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我看著水中優(yōu)美的身姿</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">似乎要飛出畫去</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">可我知道</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">故事終會(huì)老去</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">老去的還有容顏和心</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我愿置身故事之外</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">隨季節(jié)沉浮</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夜很靜，靜得落針可聞</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我想 ，如果我是鳥</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">是否會(huì)有托我飛翔的風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">沒有人可以是風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">假如緣分注定是個(gè)錯(cuò)誤</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我寧愿是條魚</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">游曳在風(fēng)過的水域</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">如果恰好纏住</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一縷隨水路過的水草</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我將會(huì)和它生生相伴</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夜色濃稠，星子清澈</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">搭橋的喜鵲從天邊趕來</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">茶，冷了杯中煙云</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">時(shí)光從指尖落去</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我的影子也似得了相思</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">詩在紙上</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">像一朵褪色的花</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">它們站在枝頭望天涯</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">天水處</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">月亮悲憐地俯翰人間 </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我坐在窗前看小橋流水</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">還有水中過往的倒影</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> </p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">星子在風(fēng)波間閃爍其詞</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">一只船從橋下經(jīng)過</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">水痕如波光粼粼的詩句</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">靜靜地看窗外如水月色</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">有個(gè)影子倒在我的腳下</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">像幼年時(shí)我剪錯(cuò)的皮影</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">當(dāng)風(fēng)吹斜影子</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我的心陡然一痛……</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">夜深影淡，七數(shù)為劫</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">逃不去夕字晚照</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">彈不破情緣水鏡</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我看見銀河之水</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">流下天宇與風(fēng)奔馳</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">喜鵲沒有來</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">只有葡萄的藤蔓</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">在不墻頭探看夜的風(fēng)景</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">此岸，彼岸</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">兩顆星，如何靠近</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">寄往水里的信</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">不知漂向何處</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">鴻雁它總也沒來</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">銀河邊，有人倚著橋身</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">默看遙遠(yuǎn)星辰</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">我坐在岸上，看緣盡緣滅</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">看風(fēng)景終不能入畫……</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">謝謝應(yīng)旺安老師雅賞點(diǎn)評(píng)</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">這首《七夕私語》以七夕傳說為引，將對(duì)愛情的悵惘、對(duì)緣分的叩問揉進(jìn)夜色與景致，情感綿密又帶著哲思，意境幽遠(yuǎn)。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">詩人借“夏蟲低語”“銀河隔岸”開篇，先點(diǎn)七夕氛圍，再轉(zhuǎn)“人間癡情囚”的現(xiàn)實(shí)無奈，用“隔岸星星”“流水往事”道盡愛而不得的悵然。中間“參透空字”“故事老去”的慨嘆，又添了層對(duì)時(shí)光與情感的清醒，“愿為魚纏水草”的念想，卻藏著對(duì)真摯陪伴的渴求。</p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1">結(jié)尾“喜鵲未來”“葡萄探看”“信漂無向”，將失落推向細(xì)膩處，“剪錯(cuò)的皮影”“心陡然一痛”的細(xì)節(jié)，讓抽象的遺憾有了具象的痛感。全詩以“私語”口吻，融傳說與現(xiàn)實(shí)、寫景與抒情，把七夕的浪漫與人間的遺憾交織，余味里滿是對(duì)情緣的輕嘆與悵惘。</p> <p class="ql-block">《醉橋》<a 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