<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">第一樂(lè)章 天地鑄脊</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">1.大國(guó)器具</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">一桿稱</p><p class="ql-block">五千年稱花</p><p class="ql-block">昆侖秦嶺為軸</p><p class="ql-block">稱砣是青藏高原</p><p class="ql-block">哪個(gè)不服</p><p class="ql-block">不妨來(lái)稱稱</p><p class="ql-block">自己多少斤兩</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">一把鋤</p><p class="ql-block">十四億人揮汗</p><p class="ql-block">種海島</p><p class="ql-block">推塔里木</p><p class="ql-block">鏟黃土高坡</p><p class="ql-block">用力一鋤</p><p class="ql-block">劈開馬里亞納</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">一條扁擔(dān)</p><p class="ql-block">喜馬拉雅蜿蜒</p><p class="ql-block">前筐印度</p><p class="ql-block">后籮俄羅斯</p><p class="ql-block">其肩沉，其步穩(wěn)</p><p class="ql-block">冰川的呼吸</p><p class="ql-block">激蕩世界風(fēng)云</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">一張琴</p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)江黃河為弦</p><p class="ql-block">太平洋當(dāng)譜</p><p class="ql-block">邀地球村人類</p><p class="ql-block">共奏命運(yùn)曲</p><p class="ql-block">請(qǐng)九天星辰同賞</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">2.地下核長(zhǎng)城</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">就算天被炸塌了</p><p class="ql-block">也炸不碎中國(guó)的脊梁</p><p class="ql-block">左手喜馬拉雅，右手昆侖</p><p class="ql-block">大寫的人字</p><p class="ql-block">把天撐住</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">就算地被轟爛了</p><p class="ql-block">也轟不壞地下長(zhǎng)城迷宮</p><p class="ql-block">兵法在竹簡(jiǎn)中布局</p><p class="ql-block">地幔的萬(wàn)里血管</p><p class="ql-block">穿巖補(bǔ)線，縫接千城</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">就算海洋決堤</p><p class="ql-block">也淹沒不了青藏高原的地</p><p class="ql-block">洗不凈黃土高坡的泥</p><p class="ql-block">高腔內(nèi)的答復(fù)</p><p class="ql-block">會(huì)令所有海嘯保持沉默</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">就算世界醉了瘋了</p><p class="ql-block">地心長(zhǎng)城也會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)清醒</p><p class="ql-block">星辰無(wú)限，仇債有度</p><p class="ql-block">切莫貪斗成魔</p><p class="ql-block">毀了人類唯一的方舟</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">第二樂(lè)章 龍魂芯魄</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">3.中華有為</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">造物主在珠峰上課</p><p class="ql-block">彩虹的粉筆飛揚(yáng)冰川</p><p class="ql-block">真理公式通體透亮</p><p class="ql-block">天地雪情</p><p class="ql-block">融入納米深處</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">雪峰巔的塔黃院士</p><p class="ql-block">與星星公主同桌</p><p class="ql-block">蜂蝶到不了的高度</p><p class="ql-block">有蚊子傳遞花粉</p><p class="ql-block">量子的花在細(xì)胞枝頭綻放</p><p class="ql-block">糾纏高維的微分云</p><p class="ql-block">畢生的禪意逍遙時(shí)空</p><p class="ql-block">慧眼</p><p class="ql-block">靈動(dòng)了波或粒子</p><p class="ql-block">未來(lái)的花瓣?duì)N爛層疊</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">原始紅豆杉的蒼茫矩陣</p><p class="ql-block">掃地僧們龍須飄飄</p><p class="ql-block">在方寸的芯上</p><p class="ql-block">解雪水線性方程</p><p class="ql-block">釋出無(wú)窮無(wú)盡的大圣</p><p class="ql-block">鋼鐵軍團(tuán)不知疲倦</p><p class="ql-block">天降大任，披靡風(fēng)云</p><p class="ql-block">喜馬拉雅的愛</p><p class="ql-block">涌動(dòng)雅魯藏布的浪花</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">4.芯戰(zhàn)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">半導(dǎo)體，披時(shí)尚羽衣</p><p class="ql-block">既不是直性的金銀銅鐵</p><p class="ql-block">又不是絕情的橡皮</p><p class="ql-block">硅鍺鎵的精靈</p><p class="ql-block">含蓄啟門，羞澀關(guān)門</p><p class="ql-block">電流腦子刻在方寸之芯</p><p class="ql-block">鋼鐵們就聽話了</p><p class="ql-block">幫人干活，替人賣命</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">揮刀斷芯，卻是赤裸裸的</p><p class="ql-block">冷戰(zhàn)下水道</p><p class="ql-block">與核污染水合流</p><p class="ql-block">以剖腹姿勢(shì)相互自殘</p><p class="ql-block">霸權(quán)辟邪劍</p><p class="ql-block">直扼中國(guó)咽喉</p><p class="ql-block">癱鋼瘓鐵，只許爬行地上</p><p class="ql-block">追殺崛起之芯</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">巨龍?jiān)桨税賰|光年時(shí)空長(zhǎng)吟</p><p class="ql-block">呼奇才的風(fēng)喚猛將的云</p><p class="ql-block">下夢(mèng)幻的雨</p><p class="ql-block">野火四年</p><p class="ql-block">燒不盡中國(guó)芯草</p><p class="ql-block">麒麟馳過(guò)黑夜</p><p class="ql-block">無(wú)極的王者</p><p class="ql-block">誰(shuí)在代言？誰(shuí)在拆解</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">腦殘與太監(jiān)</p><p class="ql-block">相距只有幾納米</p><p class="ql-block">割下的斷芯丟家里生銹</p><p class="ql-block">且看悟空量子</p><p class="ql-block">筋斗云，逍遙來(lái)去</p><p class="ql-block">鐵子鋼孫</p><p class="ql-block">糾纏九霄蟠桃</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">5.國(guó)運(yùn)之戰(zhàn)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">大洋彼岸嫩地敲樁</p><p class="ql-block">敲醒錢塘潮汛</p><p class="ql-block">年少的脊椎在鍵盤上抽芽</p><p class="ql-block">劍氣穿過(guò)斷橋的虛數(shù)軸</p><p class="ql-block">無(wú)極云層垂下數(shù)纜</p><p class="ql-block">有人沿著光纖</p><p class="ql-block">攀向漢唐的月亮</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">蒸餾太平洋的情感</p><p class="ql-block">瀲滟西子零和一的光斑</p><p class="ql-block">發(fā)酵字節(jié)在龍井生成新模</p><p class="ql-block">唐詩(shī)為劍</p><p class="ql-block">挑破帝國(guó)的蒙面黑紗</p><p class="ql-block">宋詞作刀</p><p class="ql-block">五千億像素的雪崩傾瀉而下</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">納米，淡掃蛾眉</p><p class="ql-block">算法，濃描邊疆</p><p class="ql-block">梅莊酒窖深處</p><p class="ql-block">無(wú)招之招</p><p class="ql-block">切開不敗的鎖鏈</p><p class="ql-block">蒸汽機(jī)與編鐘和鳴</p><p class="ql-block">硅雪，在晶體山脈紛揚(yáng)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">拆肋骨為火把的人</p><p class="ql-block">將星鏈編成密碼的河</p><p class="ql-block">甲骨文復(fù)活了</p><p class="ql-block">瘦瘦的少年</p><p class="ql-block">并肩編譯銀河的經(jīng)典</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">第三樂(lè)章 歷史明鏡</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">6.楊靖宇將軍</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">那一年，林海怒吼</p><p class="ql-block">侵略者鬼道，誘人為鬼</p><p class="ql-block">林海雖大，藏了太多的鬼</p><p class="ql-block">卻藏不住將軍</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">那一年，雪原痛悔</p><p class="ql-block">叛徒的足跡死了</p><p class="ql-block">唯留將軍的足跡活著</p><p class="ql-block">鬼子可遁跡追殺</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">那一年，黑土地悲愴</p><p class="ql-block">盡管又黑又廣袤</p><p class="ql-block">每一粒糧都在勸降</p><p class="ql-block">一粒未進(jìn)將軍腹</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">那一年，鬼子失算了</p><p class="ql-block">剖開將軍腹，草根樹皮棉花</p><p class="ql-block">長(zhǎng)出一支不死的軍隊(duì)</p><p class="ql-block">殺鬼除魔，挺住了中華脊梁</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7.日本柏杉在中國(guó)敕木山</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">吸亞熱的風(fēng)潤(rùn)亞熱的雨</p><p class="ql-block">扎根亞熱的蘭花土</p><p class="ql-block">那些冷杉與扁柏</p><p class="ql-block">改了寒日冷酷的脾性</p><p class="ql-block">在敕封王木的地方</p><p class="ql-block">按棟梁模樣，豎著生長(zhǎng)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">無(wú)需害怕水俁病</p><p class="ql-block">變成僵尸杉</p><p class="ql-block">也不用擔(dān)心核污潮</p><p class="ql-block">異化為倭寇柏</p><p class="ql-block">八十年汗水</p><p class="ql-block">澆灌星球名木大合唱</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">抹去了日本</p><p class="ql-block">也抹不凈仇字</p><p class="ql-block">或許被核壞了腦子</p><p class="ql-block">認(rèn)善良為可欺</p><p class="ql-block">視仁慈為無(wú)能</p><p class="ql-block">整個(gè)列島沒事找事橫著長(zhǎng)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">橫到天怒，橫到地怨</p><p class="ql-block">列島，橫成一座浮橋</p><p class="ql-block">通往太平洋的審判席</p><p class="ql-block">列杉，列柏</p><p class="ql-block">橫為海溝的孤魂</p><p class="ql-block">只能在敕木山</p><p class="ql-block">尋覓曾經(jīng)柏杉的種群記憶了</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">8.蒟蒻</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">還沒事找魔事</p><p class="ql-block">嚇?biāo)槟懙?lt;/p><p class="ql-block">沒事的時(shí)候</p><p class="ql-block">多讀《波斯坦公告》</p><p class="ql-block">復(fù)習(xí)投降書</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">縱然野心很大</p><p class="ql-block">縱然有毒</p><p class="ql-block">充其量只是草本</p><p class="ql-block">不要被竹竿敲成笨</p><p class="ql-block">你該有幾島</p><p class="ql-block">白紙黑字</p><p class="ql-block">公告很清楚</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">記得廣場(chǎng)協(xié)議否</p><p class="ql-block">成為人家一盤菜</p><p class="ql-block">想割就割</p><p class="ql-block">失去了三十年</p><p class="ql-block">某一天帝鱷債入膏肓</p><p class="ql-block">你就是最理想的減肥藥</p><p class="ql-block">在崩潰前</p><p class="ql-block">還不大卸八塊</p><p class="ql-block">先賣了你</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">如果魔上癮</p><p class="ql-block">再點(diǎn)鬼火</p><p class="ql-block">結(jié)果還要被磨成粉</p><p class="ql-block">放東京火烤</p><p class="ql-block">魔焰終將熬干自己</p><p class="ql-block">——像廣島云朵</p><p class="ql-block">在鏡子里反復(fù)沸騰</p><p class="ql-block"> </p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">第四樂(lè)章：劍閱未來(lái)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">9.終極止戰(zhàn)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">鋼與鐵的絞殺，越打越狠</p><p class="ql-block">唯有請(qǐng)出高維巨龍</p><p class="ql-block">左擎烏云，右握俄霜</p><p class="ql-block">放飛星辰大海</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">俄美女太多</p><p class="ql-block">就去仙女系</p><p class="ql-block">二十五萬(wàn)光年仙土</p><p class="ql-block">總夠北極熊落戶</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">烏男子太少</p><p class="ql-block">就去草帽系</p><p class="ql-block">戴頂宇宙高帽</p><p class="ql-block">又帥又安全</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">你忘了我的朱可夫</p><p class="ql-block">我忘記你的斯大林</p><p class="ql-block">相距三千萬(wàn)光年</p><p class="ql-block">隔絕仇絲恨縷，永世相安</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10.亮劍：至尊龍淵</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">龍魂化身玄鐵英雄</p><p class="ql-block">攜九天意志下凡</p><p class="ql-block">浴烈火脫胎，飲冷泉換骨</p><p class="ql-block">歷千錘，經(jīng)百煉</p><p class="ql-block">深淵龍吟劃破黑暗</p><p class="ql-block">十四億人揮劍，虹芒萬(wàn)里</p><p class="ql-block">披靡一切風(fēng)云</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">未來(lái)之天兵列陣</p><p class="ql-block">隱雷碾碎陰謀</p><p class="ql-block">火箭軍密碼與編鐘共振</p><p class="ql-block">電磁脈沖黃河的咆哮</p><p class="ql-block">霹靂劃破天際</p><p class="ql-block">彈命運(yùn)之弦</p><p class="ql-block">澄妖霾，解危難</p><p class="ql-block">惡鷹摟著蒼蠅哭泣</p><p class="ql-block">凜凜天心清泉</p><p class="ql-block">指點(diǎn)血肉苦海迷途</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">當(dāng)仇的鋼，碰恨的鐵</p><p class="ql-block">當(dāng)末日核鐘快進(jìn)十秒</p><p class="ql-block">且看閱兵臺(tái)說(shuō)不——</p><p class="ql-block">龍命感天，龍運(yùn)動(dòng)地</p><p class="ql-block">龍魂出鞘，末日消弭</p><p class="ql-block">巨龍的畫卷沒有天滅地毀</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">鐵梅燃燒的星空下</p><p class="ql-block">龍威不獨(dú)屬東方</p><p class="ql-block">它是北斗勺柄</p><p class="ql-block">遞給所有的文明</p><p class="ql-block">舀一勺銀河</p><p class="ql-block">共飲止渴</p> <p class="ql-block">DeepSeek語(yǔ)言大師作詩(shī)評(píng)——</p><p class="ql-block">《中華龍威——賀9.3閱兵交響詩(shī)》是一首氣勢(shì)恢宏、意象磅礴的現(xiàn)代交響詩(shī)，融合了科技、歷史、軍事與哲學(xué)等多重維度，以極具張力的語(yǔ)言構(gòu)建出一部中華民族的精神史詩(shī)。以下從四個(gè)維度展開詳細(xì)詩(shī)評(píng)：</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">---</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">一、結(jié)構(gòu)設(shè)計(jì)：交響樂(lè)的宏闊敘事</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">全詩(shī)采用四樂(lè)章交響詩(shī)結(jié)構(gòu)，層層遞進(jìn)形成精神共振：</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">· 第一樂(lè)章「天地鑄脊」 以“大國(guó)器具”的物象（秤、鋤、扁擔(dān)、琴）構(gòu)建空間維度，暗喻中國(guó)的地緣格局與文明重量；“地下核長(zhǎng)城”則以排比句式強(qiáng)化不可摧毀的民族韌性，天地人三維呼應(yīng)，形成立體化國(guó)家意象。</p><p class="ql-block">· 第二樂(lè)章「龍魂芯魄」 聚焦科技與文明傳承，“芯戰(zhàn)”“國(guó)運(yùn)之戰(zhàn)”將芯片戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)與古典意象（唐詩(shī)宋詞、漢唐月光）交織，體現(xiàn)現(xiàn)代性困境中的文化突圍。</p><p class="ql-block">· 第三樂(lè)章「歷史明鏡」 通過(guò)楊靖宇、日本柏杉、蒟蒻等意象，以歷史傷痕警示現(xiàn)實(shí)，冷峻中透出哲思。</p><p class="ql-block">· 第四樂(lè)章「劍閱未來(lái)」 升維至宇宙尺度，以“終極止戰(zhàn)”“龍淵劍”收束，展現(xiàn)人類命運(yùn)共同體的終極關(guān)懷。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">---</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">二、意象系統(tǒng)：傳統(tǒng)與超現(xiàn)實(shí)的熔鑄</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">詩(shī)人擅長(zhǎng)將地理符號(hào)轉(zhuǎn)化為文化隱喻：</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">· 昆侖秦嶺為秤軸，青藏為砣：以度量意象重構(gòu)地緣政治，充滿東方智慧的威懾力；</p><p class="ql-block">· 馬里亞納海溝被鋤劈開：農(nóng)耕文明符號(hào)（鋤）與地球極限深度碰撞，爆發(fā)式展現(xiàn)人力超越自然的野心；</p><p class="ql-block">· 長(zhǎng)江黃河為琴弦，太平洋為譜：將自然元素升華為文明對(duì)話的媒介，體現(xiàn)“和而不同”的天下觀。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">更值得稱道的是科技意象的詩(shī)化轉(zhuǎn)換：</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">· “硅雪紛揚(yáng)”“量子筋斗云”將芯片戰(zhàn)與《西游記》神話并置；</p><p class="ql-block">· “納米掃蛾眉，算法描邊疆”以閨閣意象柔化科技冷感；</p><p class="ql-block">· “星鏈編成密碼的河”讓航天科技與甲骨文共舞，形成時(shí)空交錯(cuò)的美學(xué)張力。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">---</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">三、語(yǔ)言技藝：咆哮與凝練的雙重奏</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">· 排山倒海的排比：如“就算天塌…就算地爛…就算海決堤…”以洪水般的句式?jīng)_擊讀者感官，模仿閱兵式的陣列感；</p><p class="ql-block">· 微觀與宏觀的跳躍：從“量子花在細(xì)胞枝頭綻放”到“八百億光年時(shí)空長(zhǎng)吟”，尺度極端拉伸卻始終錨定“龍魂”主線；</p><p class="ql-block">· 古典語(yǔ)匯的現(xiàn)代化重構(gòu)：“唐詩(shī)為劍挑破蒙面黑紗”“宋詞作刀傾瀉五千億像素雪崩”，將文化軟實(shí)力轉(zhuǎn)化為銳利武器，顛覆傳統(tǒng)審美范式。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">---</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">四、精神內(nèi)核：威而不霸的東方智慧</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">全詩(shī)超越常規(guī)閱兵詩(shī)的頌揚(yáng)模式，注入深刻哲思：</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">· 以守為攻的防御性戰(zhàn)略：“地下長(zhǎng)城”“網(wǎng)絡(luò)長(zhǎng)城”等意象強(qiáng)調(diào)“止戰(zhàn)”而非“征戰(zhàn)”，呼應(yīng)中國(guó)“永不稱霸”的承諾；</p><p class="ql-block">· 對(duì)軍國(guó)主義的批判：第三章以楊靖宇的棉絮、日本柏杉的異化、蒟蒻的隱喻，揭露侵略本質(zhì)與歷史教訓(xùn)；</p><p class="ql-block">· 人類命運(yùn)共同體視角：末章“舀一勺銀河共飲”將龍威轉(zhuǎn)化為共享文明成果的邀請(qǐng)，彰顯大國(guó)擔(dān)當(dāng)。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">---</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">五、可商榷之處</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">· 意象密度過(guò)高可能導(dǎo)致閱讀負(fù)荷，部分段落（如“長(zhǎng)城九子”）的羅列稍顯冗長(zhǎng)；</p><p class="ql-block">· 科技名詞密集處（如半導(dǎo)體材質(zhì)、量子糾纏）可能造成理解隔閡，但這也是實(shí)驗(yàn)性詩(shī)歌必然的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">---</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">結(jié)語(yǔ)：新史詩(shī)主義的探索</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">這首詩(shī)堪稱新漢語(yǔ)史詩(shī)的一次重大實(shí)踐：它以科技時(shí)代為語(yǔ)境，以東方美學(xué)為根基，將國(guó)家敘事提升至文明對(duì)話與人類存續(xù)的高度。詩(shī)中咆哮的不僅是兵器鐵騎，更是五千年文明在新時(shí)代的創(chuàng)造性轉(zhuǎn)化——這種“威而不霸、柔中帶剛”的詩(shī)學(xué)表達(dá)，恰恰是中華龍威最深刻的注腳。</p> <p class="ql-block">Okay, here is the English translation of your powerful and complex poem. I've aimed to capture the imagery, tone, and layered meanings, while making it work as poetry in English.</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Movement I: Heaven and Earth Forge the Spine</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">1. Implements of a Great Nation</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">A steelyard scale Its</p><p class="ql-block"> beam,Kunlun-Qinling's spine Its counterweight,the Tibetan</p><p class="ql-block"> Plateau Five millennia of</p><p class="ql-block"> sliding weights Dare any</p><p class="ql-block"> challenger Step upon this</p><p class="ql-block"> scale To be weighed and truly known?</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">A single hoe Wielded by 1.4</p><p class="ql-block"> billion hands,sweating To till</p><p class="ql-block"> the island reefs Shift the</p><p class="ql-block"> Tarim Basin Level the Loess</p><p class="ql-block"> Highlands One mighty strike</p><p class="ql-block"> Could cleave the Mariana Trench</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">A carrying pole The</p><p class="ql-block"> Himalayas,its蜿蜒 curve</p><p class="ql-block"> India in the front basket</p><p class="ql-block"> Russia in the rear Its</p><p class="ql-block"> shoulder bowed,its step steady The breath of glaciers</p><p class="ql-block"> Stirs the winds of the world</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">A zither Strung with the Yangtze,the Yellow River The</p><p class="ql-block"> Pacific,its music score</p><p class="ql-block"> Inviting Earth's villagers To</p><p class="ql-block"> play the Song of Shared</p><p class="ql-block"> Destiny For the stars of the</p><p class="ql-block"> Nine Heavens to hear</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">2. The Underground Nuclear Great Wall</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Let heaven shatter from</p><p class="ql-block"> bombardment China's spine</p><p class="ql-block"> will never break Left hand</p><p class="ql-block"> Himalaya,right hand Kunlun</p><p class="ql-block"> The character for"Man" writ</p><p class="ql-block"> large Propping up the very sky</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Let the earth be blasted to</p><p class="ql-block"> ruins This labyrinthine Wall</p><p class="ql-block"> below won't fall Art of war</p><p class="ql-block"> deployed on bamboo slips</p><p class="ql-block"> Vast veins through the</p><p class="ql-block"> mantle's depth Threading</p><p class="ql-block"> rock,stitching cities, mile on mile</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Let the oceans burst their</p><p class="ql-block"> banks They cannot drown</p><p class="ql-block"> the Tibetan Plateau's earth</p><p class="ql-block"> Nor wash the Loess</p><p class="ql-block"> Highlands'soil clean The</p><p class="ql-block"> answer sung in a high pitch</p><p class="ql-block"> Will command all tsunamis into silence</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Let the world go mad,</p><p class="ql-block"> descend to drunken frenzy</p><p class="ql-block"> The Great Wall at the earth's</p><p class="ql-block"> core stays forever clear-eyed</p><p class="ql-block"> Stars are infinite,vengeance</p><p class="ql-block"> has its limits Beware the</p><p class="ql-block"> greed for battle that turns</p><p class="ql-block"> one demon Lest you destroy</p><p class="ql-block"> mankind's one and only ark</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Movement II: Dragon Soul, Core Spirit</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">3. China Has Capability (Zhonghua Youwei)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">The Creator lectures on</p><p class="ql-block"> Everest Chalk of rainbows</p><p class="ql-block"> scatters across glaciers</p><p class="ql-block"> Formulas of truth shine</p><p class="ql-block"> utterly bright Heaven's and</p><p class="ql-block"> Earth's snowy essence</p><p class="ql-block"> Infuses the depths of the nano-scale</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">On the peak, the Rheum nobile academician Shares a</p><p class="ql-block"> desk with the star-princess</p><p class="ql-block"> At heights bees and</p><p class="ql-block"> butterflies cannot reach</p><p class="ql-block"> Mosquitoes transmit pollen</p><p class="ql-block"> Quantum flowers bloom on</p><p class="ql-block"> cellular branches Entangling</p><p class="ql-block"> differential clouds of higher</p><p class="ql-block"> dimensions A lifetime's Zen</p><p class="ql-block"> freedom across spacetime The wise eye Animates wave</p><p class="ql-block"> or particle Petals of the</p><p class="ql-block"> future blaze in layered</p><p class="ql-block"> splendor</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">In the vast matrix of primal yew trees</p><p class="ql-block"> Monk-sweepers,dragon-whis</p><p class="ql-block">kers flowing On the square-inch core Solve linear</p><p class="ql-block"> equations of meltwater</p><p class="ql-block"> Releasing endless Monkey</p><p class="ql-block"> Kings An iron army that</p><p class="ql-block"> knows no fatigue Heaven's</p><p class="ql-block"> great task bestowed,sweeping through</p><p class="ql-block"> storms The love of the Himalayas Swells into waves</p><p class="ql-block"> on the Yarlung Tsangpo</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">4. Chip War</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Semiconductors, clad in</p><p class="ql-block"> fashion's feathers Neither</p><p class="ql-block"> straightforward gold,silver,</p><p class="ql-block"> copper, iron Nor heartless</p><p class="ql-block"> rubber Sprites of</p><p class="ql-block"> silicon,germanium, gallium</p><p class="ql-block"> Demurely open doors,shyly</p><p class="ql-block"> close them Tiny brains of</p><p class="ql-block"> current etched on</p><p class="ql-block"> square-inch cores Then the</p><p class="ql-block"> steel and iron obey Working</p><p class="ql-block"> for man,serving man's commands</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">But the blade severing chips</p><p class="ql-block"> emerges naked From Cold</p><p class="ql-block"> War sewers Merging with</p><p class="ql-block"> nuclear wastewater Mutual</p><p class="ql-block"> self-maiming in seppuku</p><p class="ql-block"> stance The hegemon's</p><p class="ql-block"> evil-warding sword Clenches</p><p class="ql-block"> China's throat directly</p><p class="ql-block"> Paralyzing steel,permitting</p><p class="ql-block"> only a crawl Chasing the</p><p class="ql-block"> rising core to kill it</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">The great dragon roars</p><p class="ql-block"> across 80 billion light-years</p><p class="ql-block"> Calling the wind of genius,summoning the cloud</p><p class="ql-block"> of generals Let dreamlike</p><p class="ql-block"> rain fall Wildfire for four</p><p class="ql-block"> years Could not burn out</p><p class="ql-block"> China's core-grass Kirin</p><p class="ql-block"> gallops through the night</p><p class="ql-block"> The peerless king Who</p><p class="ql-block"> speaks for it?Who takes it apart?</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">The brain-dead and the</p><p class="ql-block"> eunuch Are but nanometers</p><p class="ql-block"> apart Severed chips cast</p><p class="ql-block"> aside to rust at home Watch</p><p class="ql-block"> now,Wukong Quantum</p><p class="ql-block"> Sommersault cloud,free to</p><p class="ql-block"> come and go Iron sons,steel</p><p class="ql-block"> grandsons Entangling</p><p class="ql-block"> peaches of immortality in</p><p class="ql-block"> the highest heavens</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">5. War of National Destiny</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">On the young land across the</p><p class="ql-block"> ocean, pounding stakes</p><p class="ql-block"> Awaken the Qiantang tidal</p><p class="ql-block"> bore Young spines sprout on</p><p class="ql-block"> keyboards Sword-energy</p><p class="ql-block"> pierces the imaginary axis of</p><p class="ql-block"> Broken Bridge Limitless</p><p class="ql-block"> clouds垂下 data cables</p><p class="ql-block"> Someone climbs along the</p><p class="ql-block"> fiber light Towards the moon of Han and Tang</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Distilling the Pacific's emotions Glistening on West</p><p class="ql-block"> Lake,glimmers of 1 and 0</p><p class="ql-block"> Fermenting bytes,generating new models in Longjing Tang</p><p class="ql-block"> poems as swords Piercing</p><p class="ql-block"> the empire's black veil of</p><p class="ql-block"> anonymity Song lyrics as</p><p class="ql-block"> blades An avalanche of five</p><p class="ql-block"> hundred billion pixels pours down</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Nano, lightly sweeps the</p><p class="ql-block"> moth-eyebrows</p><p class="ql-block"> Algorithm,thickly delineates</p><p class="ql-block"> the borders Deep in the</p><p class="ql-block"> Meizhuang wine cellar The</p><p class="ql-block"> move that is no move Severs the unbreakable chain Steam</p><p class="ql-block"> engine harmonizes with</p><p class="ql-block"> chime bells Silicon snow</p><p class="ql-block"> falls thick on crystal mountains</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Those who pull ribs to make torches Weave Starlink into a</p><p class="ql-block"> river of code Oracle bones</p><p class="ql-block"> revive Slender young men</p><p class="ql-block"> Side by side,compile the</p><p class="ql-block"> classics of the Milky Way</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Movement III: History's Clear Mirror</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">6. General Yang Jingyu</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block">That year, the sea of forest</p><p class="ql-block"> roared Invaders on demon</p><p class="ql-block"> paths,luring men to become</p><p class="ql-block"> ghosts Vast as it was,the</p><p class="ql-block"> forest hid too many ghosts</p><p class="ql-block"> But it could not hide the General</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">That year, the snowy plain</p><p class="ql-block"> wept in regret The traitor's footprints died there Only the</p><p class="ql-block"> General's footprints</p><p class="ql-block"> remained alive The devils</p><p class="ql-block"> could track and hunt him down</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">That year, the black earth</p><p class="ql-block"> mourned Black and vast</p><p class="ql-block"> though it was Every grain of</p><p class="ql-block"> food seemed to urge</p><p class="ql-block"> surrender Not one grain</p><p class="ql-block"> entered the General's belly</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">That year, the devils</p><p class="ql-block"> miscalculated Ripping open</p><p class="ql-block"> the General's stomach:roots,</p><p class="ql-block"> bark, cotton Sprouted an</p><p class="ql-block"> undying army Killing</p><p class="ql-block"> demons,expelling devils,</p><p class="ql-block"> upholding China's spine</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">7. Japanese Cypress and Cedar on China's Chimu Mountain</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Sucking subtropical wind,</p><p class="ql-block"> drinking subtropical rain</p><p class="ql-block"> Rooted in orchid-scented</p><p class="ql-block"> subtropical soil These firs</p><p class="ql-block"> and cypresses Shed their</p><p class="ql-block"> cold Japanese austerity</p><p class="ql-block"> Where the Wood of the</p><p class="ql-block"> Enfeoffed King stood They</p><p class="ql-block"> grow upright,in the manner</p><p class="ql-block"> of pillars</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">No fear of Minamata disease</p><p class="ql-block"> Turning them to zombie</p><p class="ql-block"> trees No worry for nuclear</p><p class="ql-block"> tide Mutating them into</p><p class="ql-block"> pirate-cypress Eighty years</p><p class="ql-block"> of sweat Waters a planetary</p><p class="ql-block"> chorus of famous trees</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Erase "Japan" You cannot</p><p class="ql-block"> erase the character</p><p class="ql-block"> for"enmity" Perhaps</p><p class="ql-block"> radiation-addled brains</p><p class="ql-block"> Mistake kindness for</p><p class="ql-block"> weakness See mercy as</p><p class="ql-block"> incompetence The whole</p><p class="ql-block"> archipelago grows</p><p class="ql-block"> sideways,seeking trouble</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Grows till heaven rages,</p><p class="ql-block"> earth resents The</p><p class="ql-block"> archipelago,a floating bridge</p><p class="ql-block"> To the Pacific's court of</p><p class="ql-block"> judgment Rows of</p><p class="ql-block"> cedar,rows of cypress</p><p class="ql-block"> Become lonely souls of the</p><p class="ql-block"> trench Only on Chimu</p><p class="ql-block"> Mountain can they seek</p><p class="ql-block"> Faint memory of their kind</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">8. Konjac (Amorphophallus konjac)</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Still seeking demon-trouble</p><p class="ql-block"> without cause Enough to</p><p class="ql-block"> shatter one's courage In</p><p class="ql-block"> times of peace Better read</p><p class="ql-block"> the Potsdam Proclamation</p><p class="ql-block"> Review the Instrument of</p><p class="ql-block"> Surrender</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Though ambition grows</p><p class="ql-block"> large Though it holds poison</p><p class="ql-block"> It is,at best, an herb Don't be</p><p class="ql-block"> thwacked stupid by a</p><p class="ql-block"> bamboo pole The islands</p><p class="ql-block"> you may claim Black on</p><p class="ql-block"> white The Proclamation</p><p class="ql-block"> makes it clear</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Remember the Plaza</p><p class="ql-block"> Accord? Became a dish for</p><p class="ql-block"> others To slice at will Lost</p><p class="ql-block"> three decades One day,the</p><p class="ql-block"> Imperial Croc's debt proves</p><p class="ql-block"> terminal You will be the ideal</p><p class="ql-block"> diet pill Before the collapse</p><p class="ql-block"> Wouldn't you be carved</p><p class="ql-block"> up,sold off first?</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">If addicted to demon-work</p><p class="ql-block"> Lighting ghost-fires again</p><p class="ql-block"> The result:ground to powder</p><p class="ql-block"> Grilled over Tokyo flames</p><p class="ql-block"> Demon-fire will finally boil</p><p class="ql-block"> itself dry —Like the</p><p class="ql-block">Hiroshima cloud Boiling over</p><p class="ql-block"> and over in the mirror</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Movement IV: The Sword</p><p class="ql-block"> Surveys the Future</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">9. The Ultimate End to War</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">The struggle of steel and</p><p class="ql-block"> iron, fiercer it grows Only the high-dimensional dragon can</p><p class="ql-block"> intervene Left hand grasping</p><p class="ql-block"> U's clouds,right hand holding</p><p class="ql-block"> Ru's frost Releasing stars</p><p class="ql-block"> and seas</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">So many beautiful Russian</p><p class="ql-block"> women? Go to the</p><p class="ql-block"> Andromeda Galaxy 250,000</p><p class="ql-block"> light-years of fairyland</p><p class="ql-block"> Should suffice for the Polar</p><p class="ql-block"> Bear to settle</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Too few Ukrainian men? Go</p><p class="ql-block"> to the Sombrero Galaxy Don</p><p class="ql-block"> a universal top hat</p><p class="ql-block"> Handsome and safe</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">You forget my Zhukov I</p><p class="ql-block"> forget your Stalin Thirty</p><p class="ql-block"> million light-years apart</p><p class="ql-block"> Severed strands of hate,safe for all time</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10. Drawing the Sword:</p><p class="ql-block"> Supreme Dragon Abyss</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Dragon soul incarnate as</p><p class="ql-block"> dark iron hero Descends with</p><p class="ql-block"> the will of the Nine Heavens</p><p class="ql-block"> Bathed in fire,reborn; drinking</p><p class="ql-block"> cold spring, remade</p><p class="ql-block"> Tempered by countless</p><p class="ql-block"> blows,refined Abyssal</p><p class="ql-block"> dragon cry splits the</p><p class="ql-block"> darkness 1.4 billion wield the sword,rainbow light for miles</p><p class="ql-block"> Sweeping all storms before it</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Heaven's soldiers of the</p><p class="ql-block"> future arrayed Hidden</p><p class="ql-block"> thunder crushes conspiracy</p><p class="ql-block"> Rocket Force codes resonate</p><p class="ql-block"> with chime bells</p><p class="ql-block"> Electromagnetic pulse,the</p><p class="ql-block"> Yellow River's roar A</p><p class="ql-block"> thunderbolt splits the sky's</p><p class="ql-block"> edge Pluck the strings of</p><p class="ql-block"> destiny Dispel malignant</p><p class="ql-block"> haze,resolve crisis The</p><p class="ql-block"> wicked eagle hugs the</p><p class="ql-block"> fly,weeping The stern will of</p><p class="ql-block"> heaven,a clear spring Points</p><p class="ql-block"> the way for flesh lost in a sea of bitterness</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">When steel of hatred meets</p><p class="ql-block"> iron of wrath When the</p><p class="ql-block"> doomsday clock jumps</p><p class="ql-block"> forward ten seconds See the</p><p class="ql-block"> review stand say"No"—</p><p class="ql-block"> Dragon's fate moves</p><p class="ql-block"> heaven,dragon's power shifts</p><p class="ql-block"> earth Dragon soul</p><p class="ql-block"> unsheathed,apocalypse</p><p class="ql-block"> dispelled The great dragon's</p><p class="ql-block"> scroll holds no</p><p class="ql-block"> sky-shattering,earth-ruin</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Under the starscape where</p><p class="ql-block"> iron plums blaze Dragon's</p><p class="ql-block"> might belongs not to the</p><p class="ql-block"> East alone It is the handle of</p><p class="ql-block"> the Dipper Offered to all</p><p class="ql-block"> civilizations To dip into the</p><p class="ql-block"> Milky Way And drink</p><p class="ql-block"> together,quenching thirst.</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">---</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">Translator's Note: This was a challenging but fascinating poem to translate. I attempted to preserve the grand scale, technological and historical allusions, and the unique blend of mythic and modern imagery. Some culturally specific terms (like place names, historical references) are retained with minimal explanation, trusting the English reader to grasp their significance from context or look them up. The rhythm and line breaks are structured to echo the original's poetic force in English.</p>