<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2025年8月4日, 聊齋詩社在孟凡仲社長帶領(lǐng)下, 走進淄川明圣眼科醫(yī)院開展《詩化聊齋》詩詞講座例會學習。 聊齋詩社孟社長向淄川明圣眼科醫(yī)院翟院長贈送了聊齋詩集第三集。本次活動由車春德秘書長主持,參加人員近20人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"> <span style="font-size:22px;">本次學習主要是聽取孫德冰老師的 “詩化聊齋” 詩詞創(chuàng)作專題講座。到會詩友認真聽講虛心學習。孫老師依據(jù)所讀所學和個人創(chuàng)作體會,對詩詞創(chuàng)作中 “詩化聊齋”含義逐字逐句分化講解。 并認為“詩化聊齋”的詩詞創(chuàng)設(shè),關(guān)鍵是怎樣理解“詩化”詞語的含義,這是創(chuàng)作詩詞美的重要條件。 孫老師通過對聊齋志異中的幾首詩的創(chuàng)作過程和遣詞造句的斟酌情形,將“詩化聊齋”和創(chuàng)設(shè)問題講得明明白白,引人入勝,大家聽后感覺耳目一新。聽孫老師一堂課,勝讀十年書。孫老師講課時,精彩不斷掌聲不斷,最后在歡樂的氣氛中落下帷幕?;顒咏Y(jié)束,會員們,大家拿起手中的筆,將感悟和領(lǐng)會糅合在詩化聊齋的詩詞作品中,創(chuàng)作出一首首感人的詩詞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 撰稿, 張愛麗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 2025年8月4日</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">車獻亮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">明圣醫(yī)院學習《詩化聊齋》(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">邁進眼科眸更亮,聽君授課善心靈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">光明天使德行圣,濟世良醫(yī)智慧明。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">聊齋詩社會員創(chuàng)作詩詞如下</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩化聊齋之《狼三則》(命題:孫奉勝)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">孟凡眾</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狼三則(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">可憐利害獸難分,皆為貪婪終喪身。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">斗智任憑多狡詐,狼心豈可勝人心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">車春德</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《聊齋志異》狼三則</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(一則)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卜算子.舍肉得狼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(正體.通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晚歸半夜行,狼伴屠夫轉(zhuǎn)。丟肉投食樹上掛,狼住翁脫險。 因憂屠得歡,以悅狼遭難。吊物歸君取獸皮,巧把銀兩賺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(二則)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卜算子.雙狼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(正體.通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">屠翁肉賣光,雙獸跟其步。無奈驅(qū)魔剩骨誘,狼客無心駐。 一翁妙計甘,兩獸玄機苦。兩者皆為刀下鬼,笑爾傳千古。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(三則)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卜算子.巧抓夜狼</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">(正體.通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜深弦月偏,狼趕急行路。睿智屠夫躲屋中,心亂如脫兔。 狼爪伸草苫,屠手揮刀斧。割破爪皮如吹哨,宰獸達人酷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張愛麗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">?狼三則(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(?一)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">屠夫夜歸?(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">暮色蒼茫山路彎,雙狼尾綴目眈眈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">投食未盡聲嚎唳,倚草方觀刀影寒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">假寐真攻皆妄想,連誅奮力滅貪婪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狽豺終敗仁人勝,黠狡殘軀化作煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(?二)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">麥場智斗?(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">麥場積垛月如鐮,餓目相觀危勢懸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人暴起時刀破霧,狼哀嚎處首離肩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">剖開枯草藏奸骨,斬斷幽眸熄孽煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫怕獸心施詭計,人間慧劍可擎天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">孫德冰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀蒲松齡《狼三則》有寄(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">野徑暮沉沉,狼來危困身。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">若無屠戶手,莫做晚行人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">宋世廣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀聊齋《狼三則》得句(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">食肉未成懸樹枝,起因只為肚中饑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">但凡能有半成飽,誰愿惡名身上披。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">瘦骨幾根白喂狼,惡仍心起露兇光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">保身除害須刀向,不可與敵裝善良。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">屠夫今又巧逢狼,依舊不慌還不忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">膽大并非生就是,藝高方可走八方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">董占春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀聊齋之《狼三則》湊句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晚路肉余熏,孤狼逐味勤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高鉤思避禍,意外得歡欣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狼隨非為骨,歸夜屢窮途。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今日高燈掛,人間鬼事無。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">其三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">別看夜行孤,逢狼亦可屠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刀皮一口氣,豈是嘴功夫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">肖長富</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀聊齋狼三則有感(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">利爪森眸暗夜藏,屠夫虎膽智絕狼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">公心秉守清明志,鬼魅焉能近骨香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">于新民</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">說狼(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狼獸兇殘自古傳,蒲翁筆下見一斑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">世間險惡須防范,莫效東郭愚智憐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">孫奉勝</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狼三則有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">經(jīng)典狼三則,文中喻意深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">世間多狡詐,切莫動貪心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狼三則觀后感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">重讀狼三則,童心已久違。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風來驚草木,日落閉柴扉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">脫身憑睿智,屠獸顯雄威。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如今逢盛世,何懼幾時歸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">車獻亮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">《聊齋志異》·《狼三則》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(其一)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傍晚狼聞豬肉香,垂涎三尺癮蟲長。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尾隨潛腳屠夫影,頭躲避其刀閃光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">機智肉懸高樹掛,暗將鉤爪餌中藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">凌晨夫去驚發(fā)現(xiàn),上吊伸舌小命亡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(其二)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">擔中肉盡只余骨,香味引來公母狼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">屠懼接連投骨盡,狼饞怒眥露牙長。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陽前陰后施奸計,假寐真攻心不良。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">智者揮刀將獸斬,無常黑白見閻王。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(其三)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狼趕屠夫躲草房,強伸惡爪逞兇狂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夫抓前腿飛刀剃,吹氣撐皮鼓起囊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">剔骨抽筋欣得利,喝湯吃肉喜沾光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一時肥獸吸民血,萬眾歡呼今日償。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀《狼三則》有感(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(一)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">聊齋筆下狼,越變越瘋狂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吞肉搶吃骨,揩油再飲湯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">屠夫無所有,百姓不能嘗。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">合力刀出手,把它消滅光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">(二)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">聊齋志異好文章,借喻屠夫斗狡狼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清代貪官心太狠,揩油吃肉也喝湯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">孟凡軍</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀聊齋《狼三則》有寄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">避禍肉懸高樹頭,惡狼貪吃釣彎鉤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寒星末曉屠夫返,身首低垂以謝尤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">當?shù)啦蚶欠巧埔?,紛爭弱肉世陰森?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">揮刀驅(qū)惡是英杰,莫有愚夫憐憫心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">殺豬練就退毛功,彭脹狼皮牛氣沖。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">禽獸猙獰殘暴戾,窩棚喪命難施兇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張波</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀狼三則有感(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蒲老短文叮世人,言狼三段寓層深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">路逢獸擾可思智,樹掛肉垂且保身。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">緣木求魚丟小命,售皮盈利獲多金。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">遇豺既起千鈞棒,莫長東郭慈善心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">耿加臣</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀《狼三則》贊國防事業(yè)(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">世上兇魔似虎狼,愿迎挑戰(zhàn)立東方。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">長城挽起千軍手,南岳松開萬馬韁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">航母載鷹寧四海,東風攜彈鎮(zhèn)八洋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">家園靜逸白鴿舞,盛景歡歌紫燕翔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">十六字令·狼(三首)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狼,堪比貪官欲壑狂。終遭吊,醒悟命隨亡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狼,狡似奸賊善偽裝。機關(guān)破,夢斷閃刀光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狼,魔掌得吹體變囊。逢高手,身毀見冥王。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李緒芬</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀狼三則之一.有感(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">屠夫夜幕遇狼蹤,示刃揮之斷不能。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">肉掛樹間施巧計,難抵誘惑吊懸空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">假如貪欲適時止,怎奈含鉤自取兇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">故事三則皆寓意,蒲翁文筆若敲鐘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">郭皆波</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狼三則</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">日暮屠歸危厄在,貪婪緊逼使人哀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高鉤剩肉驚狼掛,禍福相依換轉(zhuǎn)來 。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">歸途險遇惡狼隨,骨盡魂飛倚垛危。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">斬殺驚雷奸詭計,戕人害己世容誰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">三</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">暗夜荒郊藏草屋,兇狼銳爪忽侵欺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">真皮鼓氣身飛脹,宰豕奇方妙解危。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">卜算子·讀《狼三則》感懷(龍譜)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">殘月照寒枝,路曲荒郊靜。但恐狼嚎刺夜空,草木風搖徑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">驚遇狡狼攻,智斗屠門警。計斬兇狼世逞雄,巧戰(zhàn)謀終勝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">狼三則</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蒲公妙筆塑狼獰,則則奇文意韻盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">首遇懸鉤貪斃命,雙逢偷襲詐謀呈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尖刀鼓豕憑機智,野獸膨尸仗業(yè)精。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">代代流傳醒世語,人心善惡辯分明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張明榮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀《狼三則》有寄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">兇殘狼本性,欲噬夜歸人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">貪詐花招盡,誅其三度身。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀《狼三則》有感</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">志異狼篇寓意深,斯人春月又重溫。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">貪婪狡詐三則誡,落馬公職悔痛心。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">監(jiān)制, 孟凡仲</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">統(tǒng)籌, 車春德</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">收稿, 董占春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">編輯, 張愛麗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">2025年8月4四</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p>