<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特別聲明:【芳草園】聯(lián)對(duì)集錦成刊,均已得到參與成員的授權(quán)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草園】 聯(lián)對(duì)集錦組稿成員主頁(yè)鏈接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;"> 6月27日 精彩出句:</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">野鶴凌風(fēng)舞逸閑(琢玉)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凌波俚曲逐風(fēng)悠(琢玉)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">游園小蝶醉花叢(琢玉)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">朗月穿林灑素輝(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">高飛紫燕剪云開(kāi)(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穿波幼鯉戲荷叢(荷花)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">峭壁侵天立峻嚴(yán) (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">辭秋征雁破云殘 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">偷香老蝶繞荷池 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">瘦梅映雪綻孤高(老農(nóng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">出林樵斧斫云開(kāi)(老農(nóng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">銜泥雛燕探花蹊(老農(nóng))</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">閑鶴梳翎舞逸姿 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">依橋塔影枕波悠 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">戀花粉蝶戲荷叢 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">孤月臨江寫(xiě)寂寥(老丁)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">落山夕照染江紅(老?。?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">學(xué)飛乳燕過(guò)籬墻(老?。?lt;/span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">修竹搖風(fēng)消俗塵(梧桐)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">流云樵叟踏歌來(lái)(梧桐)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穿橋老馬醉溪花(梧桐)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">瓊草迎風(fēng)舞裊娜(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">飛天晚霞映山紅(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">繞梁喜鵲入桃溪(若水)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠竹凌霜挺秀頎(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">掠堤晚燕剪霞?xì)垼ㄎ男模?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">銜泥新燕繞?間(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">瘦菊吟風(fēng)送暗香(於發(fā))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">過(guò)村松火照花明(於發(fā))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">尋芳老蝶繞花村(於發(fā))</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">艷蕊簪園涌郁氛(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">離山樵擔(dān)擾蛩飛(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">尋魚(yú)老鶴踏湖田(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">仙鶴凌云舞雅閑 (不亦l(xiāng)e乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">離群海鳥(niǎo)逐詩(shī)忙 (不亦l(xiāng)e乎)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">追云野鶴捋松山 (不亦l(xiāng)e乎)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">彩蝶游花舞雅嫻 (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">攬橋江樹(shù)映波明 (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">游春彩蝶戲花林 (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">翠竹搖風(fēng)聽(tīng)玉琴(淡定)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">橫江鷺鳥(niǎo)踏波飛(淡定)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逛山彩蝶舞花堤(淡定)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">峻嶺迎風(fēng)響雅音(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">返家牧笛唱云飛(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸山老虎隱松林(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古木盤(pán)云抱寂寥 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">臨堤柳線釣星沉 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">穿花蛺蝶繞荷亭 (美西洋)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">修竹搖風(fēng)舞逸恬(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">帶波水草曳星光(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">凌空白鷺探荷叢(弦思)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">高樹(shù)搖風(fēng)影披離(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">迎人燭火照途開(kāi)(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天) </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">尋香春蝶舞花畦(元其)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">幽泉漱石鳴清越(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">古木迎風(fēng)送嫩涼 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸渡漁舟犁月碎(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">棲沙鷗鳥(niǎo)掠風(fēng)驚 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">試水稚鳧巡柳岸(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">覓風(fēng)嫩蝶戀花蹊 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">簡(jiǎn) 評(píng):</b></p><p class="ql-block">首聯(lián)出句:幽泉漱石鳴清越</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析: 景物聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> 幽泉:幽深隱僻的泉水。晉左思 《魏都賦》:“潛龍浮景,而幽泉高鏡?!? </p><p class="ql-block"> 漱石:沖刷巖石。清 · 陳廷敬《雨夜懷思母庵 》:“漱石三秋雨,流花第二泉?!? </p><p class="ql-block"> 清越:清脆悠揚(yáng),并列式的形容性的合成詞。 明 · 金麟厚《兵營(yíng)作》:“滿堂絲竹爭(zhēng)清越,繞壘河山聚淑靈?!?lt;/p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為:</p><p class="ql-block"> 幽深隱僻的泉水沖刷巖石,發(fā)出清脆悠揚(yáng)的聲音。</p><p class="ql-block"> “幽泉”點(diǎn)明泉水所處環(huán)境幽靜,“漱石”描繪水流沖刷石頭的動(dòng)態(tài),二者結(jié)合勾勒出一幅山林間清泉流淌、石礫被沖刷的清幽畫(huà)面,仿佛能讓人感受到山林的靜謐與生機(jī)?!傍Q清越”則以聲襯靜,既展現(xiàn)自然景物的和諧,也暗含文人對(duì)清雅、寧?kù)o生活境界的向往。</p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們意象補(bǔ)充豐富,畫(huà)面協(xié)調(diào),辭工意美的佳對(duì)舉例如下: </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">幽泉漱石鳴清越</span></p><p class="ql-block">野鶴凌風(fēng)舞逸閑</p><p class="ql-block">峭壁侵天立峻嚴(yán)</p><p class="ql-block">瘦梅映雪綻孤高</p><p class="ql-block">孤月臨江寫(xiě)寂寥</p><p class="ql-block">瓊草迎風(fēng)舞裊娜</p><p class="ql-block">翠竹凌霜挺秀頎</p><p class="ql-block">艷蕊簪園涌郁氛</p><p class="ql-block">彩蝶游花舞雅嫻</p><p class="ql-block">古木盤(pán)云抱寂寥</p><p class="ql-block">修竹搖風(fēng)舞逸恬</p> <p class="ql-block">二聯(lián)出句:歸渡漁舟犁月碎</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析:景物聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為:</p><p class="ql-block"> 返航的漁舟在水面行駛,船槳(或船身)劃破了倒映在水中的月影,使得月光碎成粼粼波光,如同被“犁”開(kāi)的碎片。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句以漁舟為眼,用一個(gè)“犁”字盤(pán)活了水月之景,歸舟、月色、碎波,組合起來(lái)有種靜謐又略帶蒼茫的韻味。漁船歸航是“動(dòng)”,月色皎潔是“靜”,碎月隨波蕩漾,既顯水鄉(xiāng)生活的質(zhì)樸,又含幾分對(duì)時(shí)光、對(duì)自然的哲思,余味悠長(zhǎng)。</p><p class="ql-block"> 對(duì)此句要注意畫(huà)面同框,雖然很多時(shí)候白天夜晚都有月亮,但對(duì)此句時(shí),所選意象應(yīng)以月光出現(xiàn)為好。</p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們?cè)~工意美的佳對(duì)很多,請(qǐng)師友們賞讀,不再一一舉例。</p> <p class="ql-block">三聯(lián)出句:試水稚鳧巡柳岸</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析:情景聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> 試水:指幼鴨初次下水,或試探性地在水中活動(dòng),暗含“嘗試、探索”的動(dòng)態(tài),也點(diǎn)出季節(jié)可能是春日(幼禽初長(zhǎng)成)。</p><p class="ql-block"> 稚鳧:幼小的野鴨,以“稚”字突出生命的靈動(dòng),為畫(huà)面增添生機(jī)。</p><p class="ql-block"> 柳岸:栽種柳樹(shù)的河岸,“柳”常與春日、柔美相關(guān),奠定清雅的背景基調(diào)。</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為:</p><p class="ql-block"> 幼小的野鴨,沿著柳岸,在流動(dòng)的河水中初次下水,就能歡快地游來(lái)游去。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句以“逝水”“稚鳧”“柳岸”構(gòu)建活動(dòng)場(chǎng)景,用“巡”字活化小鳧的情態(tài),在動(dòng)靜交織中展現(xiàn)自然的生機(jī)與靜謐,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練而意境悠遠(yuǎn)。</p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們辭工意美的佳句多多,列舉幾例供師友們賞讀:</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">試水稚鳧巡柳岸</span></p><p class="ql-block">游園小蝶醉花叢</p><p class="ql-block">穿波幼鯉戲荷叢</p><p class="ql-block">銜泥新燕繞梁間</p><p class="ql-block">尋芳老蝶繞花村</p><p class="ql-block">尋魚(yú)老鶴踏湖田</p><p class="ql-block">游春彩蝶戲花林 </p><p class="ql-block">尋香春蝶舞花畦</p> <p class="ql-block">審閱:芳草 云朵 楊柳岸 朱簡(jiǎn) 鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng) 文心 笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">組稿:琢玉 荷花 震撼哥 老農(nóng) ANG.ZQ 老丁 梧桐 若水 文心 於發(fā) 雨燕 不亦l(xiāng)e乎 燕燕于飛 淡定 大海 美西洋 弦思 元其 笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">(以投稿先后為序)</p><p class="ql-block">編錄:笛里關(guān)山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅,選取有代表性的對(duì)句簡(jiǎn)評(píng)一二,雷同句以投稿先后順序選擇,其余對(duì)句不再一一列舉。以上簡(jiǎn)評(píng)僅代表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn),因?qū)W識(shí)水平有限,難免有疏漏和不妥之處,歡迎各位師友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句為芳草老師精選集句</p><p class="ql-block">②對(duì)句為師友們?cè)瓌?chuàng)</p><p class="ql-block">③圖片根據(jù)出句意境,由AI創(chuàng)作</p>