<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特別聲明：【芳草園】聯(lián)對(duì)集錦成刊，均已得到參與成員的授權(quán)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草園】 聯(lián)對(duì)集錦組稿成員主頁(yè)鏈接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">5月30日精彩出句：</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月灑庭梧漫客愁（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬歌繞樹(shù)自吟風(fēng)（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逸趣長(zhǎng)隨白鶴悠（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風(fēng)過(guò)庭花送暗香（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙歌入郭久縈懷（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陋室幽居秋色閑（元其）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙鼓池荷送夜涼（老農(nóng)）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">螢燈穿牖暗追星（老農(nóng)）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚歲同棲白首情（老農(nóng)）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝶舞徑蘭添雅情（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">螢光繞院漫流輝（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">來(lái)世再尋芳草香（荷花）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鵲舞庭梧報(bào)喜音（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">螢燈落草屢飛星（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">來(lái)世跟隨綠水棲（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犬吠柴門(mén)動(dòng)客情 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鵲巢懸樹(shù)獨(dú)朝天 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歲月長(zhǎng)留綠水閑 (震撼哥)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝶舞園花悅秀眸（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳絲垂岸漫攔風(fēng)（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">前世只同綠水生（大海）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙鼓池荷碎靜波 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">螢燈懸葉暗窺人 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今世共憐碧水幽 (美西洋)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月掛江樓動(dòng)別愁（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花燈照水靜迎風(fēng)（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">長(zhǎng)夜且同銀漢眠（梧桐）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">螢照池荷泛淡光（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">螢光繞徑暗隨風(fēng)（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故里獨(dú)鐘竹舍寧（文心）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雀落門(mén)頭待契機(jī) (聽(tīng)花無(wú)語(yǔ))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕窩入戶靜迎春 (聽(tīng)花無(wú)語(yǔ))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚歲同觀明月圓 (聽(tīng)花無(wú)語(yǔ))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鳳舞井梧唱好音 (於發(fā)）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雀巢懸樹(shù)獨(dú)吟風(fēng)（於發(fā)）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故國(guó)自知碧水長(zhǎng)（於發(fā)）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙鼓池荷破寂宵 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藤蔓繞棚細(xì)篩光 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白首同吟秋水長(zhǎng) (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙鼓池荷鬧徹宵（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕窩壘壁喜吟風(fēng)（若水）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚歲同吟綠水幽（若水）</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝶舞堤花添悅情（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷盤(pán)浮水漫吟風(fēng)（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歲月長(zhǎng)隨碧水悠（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犬吠竹風(fēng)驚素心 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蜂房棲壁靜臨風(fēng) (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">往事皆拋慧日長(zhǎng) (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙鼓池塘送藕風(fēng) (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕巢雕榭漫迎風(fēng) (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">往事盡隨煙靄消 (燕燕于飛)</span></p> <p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn) 評(píng)：</p><p class="ql-block">首聯(lián)出句：蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析: 情景聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> 清夢(mèng)：猶美夢(mèng)。宋陸游《枕上述夢(mèng)》： “江湖送老一漁舟，清夢(mèng)猶成塞上游?！?lt;/p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> 蟬兒在窗邊的柳樹(shù)上賣(mài)力地鳴叫，打擾了我的美夢(mèng)。</p><p class="ql-block"> “窗柳”是蟬兒行動(dòng)的環(huán)境。出句為前四后三結(jié)構(gòu)，具有因果關(guān)系。</p><p class="ql-block"> 對(duì)句應(yīng)和出句意義相關(guān)，應(yīng)該回答擾了清夢(mèng)后“我”所出現(xiàn)的情緒反應(yīng)。</p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們和出句意象相關(guān)，生發(fā)自然的佳對(duì)舉例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)</span></p><p class="ql-block">月灑庭梧漫客愁</p><p class="ql-block">犬吠柴門(mén)動(dòng)客情</p><p class="ql-block">蝶舞堤花添悅情</p><p class="ql-block">蝶舞徑蘭添雅情</p><p class="ql-block">月掛江樓動(dòng)別愁</p><p class="ql-block">風(fēng)過(guò)庭花送暗香</p><p class="ql-block">鵲舞庭梧報(bào)喜音</p><p class="ql-block">蝶舞園花悅秀眸</p> <p class="ql-block">二聯(lián)出句：蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析：情景聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> 蜘蛛在屋檐下結(jié)起了網(wǎng)，（我）在床上躺著，靜靜地望著高空中的明月。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句通過(guò)“蛛網(wǎng)”“檐”“月”等意象，描繪出一幅寂靜、清冷的畫(huà)面，借景抒情，表達(dá)出一種寧?kù)o、閑適，又略帶孤寂、落寞的心境。</p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們準(zhǔn)確把握出句含義，生發(fā)自然，意象諧和的佳對(duì)舉例如下：</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月</span></p><p class="ql-block">蛙歌入郭久縈懷</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">蟬歌繞樹(shù)自吟風(fēng)</span></p><p class="ql-block">花燈照水靜迎風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block">螢光繞徑暗隨風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block">雀巢懸樹(shù)獨(dú)吟風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block">燕窩壘壁喜吟風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block">荷盤(pán)浮水漫吟風(fēng)</p> <p class="ql-block">三聯(lián)出句：余生相倚青山老</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析：感懷聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> 余生：猶殘生，指晚年。南朝宋謝靈運(yùn)《君子有所思行》：“余生不歡娛，何以竟暮歸。”</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為：</p><p class="ql-block"> （我的）晚年，就和青山相互依偎著，慢慢老去。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句營(yíng)造出一種寧?kù)o、悠遠(yuǎn)且?guī)в性?shī)意的意境。表達(dá)了一種能長(zhǎng)久地與自然相伴，在青山的環(huán)繞中安度時(shí)光，直至生命老去的情感，蘊(yùn)含著對(duì)自然的喜愛(ài)、對(duì)寧?kù)o生活的向往以及一種豁達(dá)、淡然的人生態(tài)度。 </p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們和出句的意旨相關(guān)，風(fēng)格協(xié)調(diào)，辭工意美的佳對(duì)舉例如下： </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">余生相倚青山老</span></p><p class="ql-block">逸趣長(zhǎng)隨白鶴悠</p><p class="ql-block">陋室幽居秋色閑</p><p class="ql-block">故里獨(dú)鐘竹舍寧</p><p class="ql-block">白首同吟秋水長(zhǎng)</p><p class="ql-block">往事盡隨煙靄消</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">長(zhǎng)夜且同銀漢眠</span></p> <p class="ql-block">審閱：芳草 云朵 楊柳岸 朱簡(jiǎn) 鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng) 文心 笛里關(guān)山 </p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">組稿：</p><p class="ql-block">琢玉 元其 老農(nóng) 荷花 雨燕 震撼哥 大海 美西洋 梧桐 文心 聽(tīng)花無(wú)語(yǔ) 於發(fā) ANG.ZQ 若水 淡定 笛里關(guān)山 燕燕于飛</p><p class="ql-block">（以投稿先后為序）</p><p class="ql-block">編錄：笛里關(guān)山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅，選取有代表性的對(duì)句簡(jiǎn)評(píng)一二，雷同句以投稿先后順序選擇，其余對(duì)句不再一一列舉。以上簡(jiǎn)評(píng)僅代表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，因?qū)W識(shí)水平有限，難免有疏漏和不妥之處，歡迎各位師友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句為芳草老師精選集句</p><p class="ql-block">②對(duì)句為師友們?cè)瓌?chuàng)</p><p class="ql-block">③圖片來(lái)自AI創(chuàng)作</p>