<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> 特別聲明:【芳草園】聯(lián)對(duì)集錦成刊,均已得到參與成員的授權(quán)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/42i5zs47" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:20px;">【芳草園】 聯(lián)對(duì)集錦組稿成員主頁(yè)鏈接</a></p> <p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px;">5月30日精彩出句:</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月灑庭梧漫客愁(琢玉)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬歌繞樹(shù)自吟風(fēng)(琢玉)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">逸趣長(zhǎng)隨白鶴悠(琢玉)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">風(fēng)過(guò)庭花送暗香(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙歌入郭久縈懷(元其)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">陋室幽居秋色閑(元其)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙鼓池荷送夜涼(老農(nóng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">螢燈穿牖暗追星(老農(nóng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚歲同棲白首情(老農(nóng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝶舞徑蘭添雅情(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">螢光繞院漫流輝(荷花)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">來(lái)世再尋芳草香(荷花)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鵲舞庭梧報(bào)喜音(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">螢燈落草屢飛星(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">來(lái)世跟隨綠水棲(雨燕)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犬吠柴門(mén)動(dòng)客情 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鵲巢懸樹(shù)獨(dú)朝天 (震撼哥)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歲月長(zhǎng)留綠水閑 (震撼哥)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝶舞園花悅秀眸(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">柳絲垂岸漫攔風(fēng)(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">前世只同綠水生(大海)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙鼓池荷碎靜波 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">螢燈懸葉暗窺人 (美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">今世共憐碧水幽 (美西洋)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">月掛江樓動(dòng)別愁(梧桐)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">花燈照水靜迎風(fēng)(梧桐)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">長(zhǎng)夜且同銀漢眠(梧桐)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">螢照池荷泛淡光(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">螢光繞徑暗隨風(fēng)(文心)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故里獨(dú)鐘竹舍寧(文心)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雀落門(mén)頭待契機(jī) (聽(tīng)花無(wú)語(yǔ))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕窩入戶靜迎春 (聽(tīng)花無(wú)語(yǔ))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚歲同觀明月圓 (聽(tīng)花無(wú)語(yǔ))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">鳳舞井梧唱好音 (於發(fā))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">雀巢懸樹(shù)獨(dú)吟風(fēng)(於發(fā))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">故國(guó)自知碧水長(zhǎng)(於發(fā))</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙鼓池荷破寂宵 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">藤蔓繞棚細(xì)篩光 (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">白首同吟秋水長(zhǎng) (Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙鼓池荷鬧徹宵(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕窩壘壁喜吟風(fēng)(若水)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">晚歲同吟綠水幽(若水)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝶舞堤花添悅情(淡定)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">荷盤(pán)浮水漫吟風(fēng)(淡定)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">歲月長(zhǎng)隨碧水悠(淡定)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">犬吠竹風(fēng)驚素心 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蜂房棲壁靜臨風(fēng) (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">往事皆拋慧日長(zhǎng) (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛙鼓池塘送藕風(fēng) (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">燕巢雕榭漫迎風(fēng) (燕燕于飛)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">余生相倚青山老(問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:20px;">往事盡隨煙靄消 (燕燕于飛)</span></p> <p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn) 評(píng):</p><p class="ql-block">首聯(lián)出句:蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析: 情景聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> 清夢(mèng):猶美夢(mèng)。宋陸游《枕上述夢(mèng)》: “江湖送老一漁舟,清夢(mèng)猶成塞上游?!?lt;/p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為:</p><p class="ql-block"> 蟬兒在窗邊的柳樹(shù)上賣(mài)力地鳴叫,打擾了我的美夢(mèng)。</p><p class="ql-block"> “窗柳”是蟬兒行動(dòng)的環(huán)境。出句為前四后三結(jié)構(gòu),具有因果關(guān)系。</p><p class="ql-block"> 對(duì)句應(yīng)和出句意義相關(guān),應(yīng)該回答擾了清夢(mèng)后“我”所出現(xiàn)的情緒反應(yīng)。</p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們和出句意象相關(guān),生發(fā)自然的佳對(duì)舉例如下:</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">蟬鳴窗柳擾清夢(mèng)</span></p><p class="ql-block">月灑庭梧漫客愁</p><p class="ql-block">犬吠柴門(mén)動(dòng)客情</p><p class="ql-block">蝶舞堤花添悅情</p><p class="ql-block">蝶舞徑蘭添雅情</p><p class="ql-block">月掛江樓動(dòng)別愁</p><p class="ql-block">風(fēng)過(guò)庭花送暗香</p><p class="ql-block">鵲舞庭梧報(bào)喜音</p><p class="ql-block">蝶舞園花悅秀眸</p> <p class="ql-block">二聯(lián)出句:蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析:情景聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為:</p><p class="ql-block"> 蜘蛛在屋檐下結(jié)起了網(wǎng),(我)在床上躺著,靜靜地望著高空中的明月。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句通過(guò)“蛛網(wǎng)”“檐”“月”等意象,描繪出一幅寂靜、清冷的畫(huà)面,借景抒情,表達(dá)出一種寧?kù)o、閑適,又略帶孤寂、落寞的心境。</p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們準(zhǔn)確把握出句含義,生發(fā)自然,意象諧和的佳對(duì)舉例如下:</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">蛛網(wǎng)掛檐高臥月</span></p><p class="ql-block">蛙歌入郭久縈懷</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">蟬歌繞樹(shù)自吟風(fēng)</span></p><p class="ql-block">花燈照水靜迎風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block">螢光繞徑暗隨風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block">雀巢懸樹(shù)獨(dú)吟風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block">燕窩壘壁喜吟風(fēng)</p><p class="ql-block">荷盤(pán)浮水漫吟風(fēng)</p> <p class="ql-block">三聯(lián)出句:余生相倚青山老</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意解析:感懷聯(lián)</p><p class="ql-block"> 余生:猶殘生,指晚年。南朝宋謝靈運(yùn)《君子有所思行》:“余生不歡娛,何以竟暮歸。”</p><p class="ql-block">聯(lián)意為:</p><p class="ql-block"> (我的)晚年,就和青山相互依偎著,慢慢老去。</p><p class="ql-block"> 出句營(yíng)造出一種寧?kù)o、悠遠(yuǎn)且?guī)в性?shī)意的意境。表達(dá)了一種能長(zhǎng)久地與自然相伴,在青山的環(huán)繞中安度時(shí)光,直至生命老去的情感,蘊(yùn)含著對(duì)自然的喜愛(ài)、對(duì)寧?kù)o生活的向往以及一種豁達(dá)、淡然的人生態(tài)度。 </p><p class="ql-block"> 師友們和出句的意旨相關(guān),風(fēng)格協(xié)調(diào),辭工意美的佳對(duì)舉例如下: </p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">余生相倚青山老</span></p><p class="ql-block">逸趣長(zhǎng)隨白鶴悠</p><p class="ql-block">陋室幽居秋色閑</p><p class="ql-block">故里獨(dú)鐘竹舍寧</p><p class="ql-block">白首同吟秋水長(zhǎng)</p><p class="ql-block">往事盡隨煙靄消</p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px;">長(zhǎng)夜且同銀漢眠</span></p> <p class="ql-block">審閱:芳草 云朵 楊柳岸 朱簡(jiǎn) 鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng) 文心 笛里關(guān)山 </p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng):笛里關(guān)山</p><p class="ql-block">組稿:</p><p class="ql-block">琢玉 元其 老農(nóng) 荷花 雨燕 震撼哥 大海 美西洋 梧桐 文心 聽(tīng)花無(wú)語(yǔ) 於發(fā) ANG.ZQ 若水 淡定 笛里關(guān)山 燕燕于飛</p><p class="ql-block">(以投稿先后為序)</p><p class="ql-block">編錄:笛里關(guān)山</p> <p class="ql-block"> 限于篇幅,選取有代表性的對(duì)句簡(jiǎn)評(píng)一二,雷同句以投稿先后順序選擇,其余對(duì)句不再一一列舉。以上簡(jiǎn)評(píng)僅代表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn),因?qū)W識(shí)水平有限,難免有疏漏和不妥之處,歡迎各位師友予以指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">①出句為芳草老師精選集句</p><p class="ql-block">②對(duì)句為師友們?cè)瓌?chuàng)</p><p class="ql-block">③圖片來(lái)自AI創(chuàng)作</p>