<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 目 錄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、開卷詩 二、選粹詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、唱和詩 四、賞析詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五、結(jié)卷詩</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、開卷詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">端午節(jié)小景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨曦乍現(xiàn)夏風(fēng)涼，接踵觀光著盛妝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">愿佑明眸爭(zhēng)洗露，靈均駐足早尋香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:靈均，屈原的字。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">童趣. (新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">笑賞平湖偶適閑，心潮蕩漾憶韶年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春節(jié)燈火迎神靜，夏至河流戲鯉歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">迷藏臥蜷秋色地，鼓書唱彈雪冰天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)華已逝蒼髯叟，老驥徒籌躍嶺巒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小滿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">楊柳搖風(fēng)百囀鳴，膏腴沃土喚深耕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">適時(shí)競(jìng)種禾苗潤(rùn)，補(bǔ)缺全栽葉脈清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">壟壟苞蘆期拔節(jié)，田田水稻孕新英。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">耘犁春夏農(nóng)心暢，汗灑金疇別樣情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">行香子?無憂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人至稀齡，無悔無憂。嘆浮生意志難酬。誰能恩賜，喜樂春秋。愿春長(zhǎng)駐，花長(zhǎng)艷，水長(zhǎng)流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">黃昏得趣，殘陽歸岫，看波濤洶涌奔流。樓橋輝映，醉染雙眸。更草如茵，樹如蓋，月如鉤。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二、選粹詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">再游曲江池</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朱力平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">時(shí)隔三載再游園，綠柳飄飄今又還。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">江水春容靈動(dòng)在，誰識(shí)舊客站池前！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">珠簾卷?游杜鵑花海</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鄭坤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 春風(fēng)暖，杜鵑妍。山巒百里斑斕。多色交融如畫，群蜂嬉蕊歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 男士女郎情綻，花香意醉綿綿。忘卻此間煩惱，身照靚，舞姿翩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鷓鴣天?貴州百里杜鵑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張建國(guó)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 鋪天畫卷接天陲，匠心裁作錦香幃。殷紅百里金坡焰，柔媚三春普底暉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 風(fēng)慢拂，浪輕推，花魂暗惹客難歸。千年一吻群芳妒，不戀瑤池戀此妃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔南南呂·一剪梅〕詩情畫意小興安（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">賀聲林</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 綠色興安畫意濃，城在林中，林在城中?；t杉綠草青青，鳥叫聲聲，鹿叫鳴鳴。（前腔）?上紅松白樺生，郁郁蔥蔥，密密層層。城樓人影攬星星，情意濃濃，詩意濃濃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 當(dāng)街花墻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">胡學(xué)榮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">薔薇月季竹笆芒，墻內(nèi)開花墻外香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨后風(fēng)前嬌容顫，迎來送往物情忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一枝獨(dú)秀玉簪立，萬朵交輝環(huán)佩鏘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">觸手可親猶自愛，美腴與共護(hù)春光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">釵頭鳳?感 懷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蘇秀云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 荷花俏。榴花鬧。歷風(fēng)經(jīng)雨形蹤渺。幽緒卷。遐思亂。縷縷陳情，至今難斷。戀。戀。戀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 青春老。伊人曉。幾多幽愫猶難了。何需怨，夙情伴。初衷仍在，但求如愿。盼。盼。盼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏游</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鞠馥陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">喜鵲翀吟旋谷灣，聳崖陡麓飾新顏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">興安抖峭憑云繞，呼水揚(yáng)波任霧環(huán)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">艷艷紅花搖雨靚，幽幽綠柳舞風(fēng)斕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">無垠阡陌嵐煙渺，詞嫗詩翁醉忘還。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老友歡聚一堂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金淑芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">久別重逢歡樂盛，相逢一笑溫暖生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">杯中酒滿情難盡，席上言歡意未平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">往事如煙隨夢(mèng)遠(yuǎn)，新程似錦待心耕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今宵莫問歸何處，且把歡聲寄月明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 杏花節(jié)吟（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">郭曉春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">東風(fēng)駘蕩杏花天，萬樹彤云照眼鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蝶戀芳叢枝上舞，鶯啼繡野客中穿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">香浮曲徑苔痕綠，影落清溪錦浪翻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫負(fù)韶華春正好，簪英酹酒效詩仙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山花子·憶母親（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萬國(guó)華</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 縈繞孩提記憶真，燈前縫補(bǔ)到更深。弱體遮風(fēng)多少載，滿堂春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 育子仁德勤教誨，治家儉樸任艱辛。慈母恩情無以報(bào)，淚紛紛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尋梅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">薛淑春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪覆松山蘊(yùn)蕊時(shí)，深根堅(jiān)骨任風(fēng)欺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不爭(zhēng)嬌貌早春報(bào)，少有清香遠(yuǎn)客知。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">經(jīng)歷苦寒花未落，貪觀新秀叟來遲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尋她幽谷芳容現(xiàn)，了卻三冬晝夜思。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">頌秦始皇（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">穿越時(shí)空話始皇，深謀遠(yuǎn)慮治國(guó)強(qiáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">征服六域名華夏，繪畫一幀鐫史章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文字相同千古頌，度量規(guī)范萬年揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">長(zhǎng)城腳下回音壁，閃耀豐碑百世芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吟朝陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李相文</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">東君神韻嶺巔生，璀璨霞輝耀眼明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">玉宇云飛飄靄霧，群巒樹舞繞鵑鶯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)搖翠葉花枝茂，雨蕩浮塵苑圃清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漫步長(zhǎng)堤迎旭日，心怡雅興賦詩行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">畫堂春.茉莉花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">呂彬華</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">姝容仙態(tài)美嬌娘，冰姿淡雅芬芳。暖風(fēng)吹過滿園香，蝶醉蜂狂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">疑似綠叢飄雪，恰如寸隙斜陽。梅魂菊影透頑強(qiáng)，縈繞心房。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日抒懷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">細(xì)品歲月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">野村縈紫靄，松徑伴流泉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)驟催時(shí)雨，陰濃藏沫蟬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">結(jié)廬云盡處，品茗柳槐前。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">俯仰觀奇景，歌吟憑自然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">星海廣場(chǎng)飼鷗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 范連韌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">深海藍(lán)潮映日紅，長(zhǎng)橋橫跨勢(shì)標(biāo)雄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游人搶鏡金堤上，群鳥銜糧玉手中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">展翅精靈穿曉霧，嚶聲雅態(tài)帶清風(fēng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此身暫與塵囂遠(yuǎn)，心共云鷗遨碧空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詠蘭草花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">劉文波</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">谷澗滋生蘭草花，迎風(fēng)起舞展芳華。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">甘為曠野添春意，盡潤(rùn)群山沐晚霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">絢麗嬌顏招眾愛，移栽盆景惹人夸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">英姿醉在林園里，秀色常留百姓家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贈(zèng)詩友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">琴韻瀟湘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今生不悔賦辭修，共處還看趣味投。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">下筆抒懷忘怨句，成詩解意有佳儔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">與君相遇梅蘭并，結(jié)伴無猜菊竹遒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">綺夢(mèng)同題情繾綣，伯牙琴奏水山流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">西江月?屈子淚（通韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">周亞元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 萬古汨羅增恨，千年老樹逢春。國(guó)亡身殞楚人心，欲與沉冤誰論？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 水上龍舟并進(jìn)，空中鳶鳥齊跟。菖蒲雄酒祭英魂，更有《九歌》《天問》。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔雙調(diào)?落梅風(fēng)〕孟夏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山清水秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春留步，鵑綻蕾，絮飄空柳搖風(fēng)媚。釣人倚竿波映暉，暮煙中隕星劃墜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">湘西張家界</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老疙瘩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">君意升仙夢(mèng)久空，輪回期盼有無中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">與卿遠(yuǎn)隔三千載，多少相思化碧峰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">釵頭鳳?初夏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 于 發(fā)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 新荷燦，蘆枝亂，蕙風(fēng)吹露田園顯。群山草，天空鳥，夜空明月九州高照。妙，妙，妙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 銀珠見，家人喚，雨淋身上如香汗。農(nóng)夫好，夏初早，機(jī)車翻土搶耕時(shí)到。巧，巧，巧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">興安杜鵑花（通韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老真</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平生最愛大石砬，甘守貧窮氣自華。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">最喜春風(fēng)來作客，舉杯滿面散紅霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">竹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">姜濤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">葉盛花窮各有詞，山高澗險(xiǎn)任由之。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新尖執(zhí)意懷春夢(mèng)，老筍無心到夏時(shí)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">正眼芊身藏傲骨，傳言節(jié)外又生枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清風(fēng)也可吹斜霧，褒貶多來少作詩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寫在AI詩潮到來之際</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張慧</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刻苦學(xué)詩并不慌，豈容A l倒幫忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寧憑半月敲三句，甭用須臾寫一章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">應(yīng)免文壇添亂事，難禁假冒仿初唐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">揮毫守份凡塵禮，地氣邀仙慰夕陽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">致敬白衣天使</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">馬占河</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燕帽白衣燦爛容，嬌姿柔體步輕盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">扶傷祛痛真心獻(xiàn)，濟(jì)世懸壺妙手呈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">纖手輕輕撫病患，深情脈脈止悲聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">可欣天使無含怨，普渡蒼黎苦海中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">江南水郡小區(qū)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">肖國(guó)發(fā)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">修竹根根路兩旁，小橋流水響叮當(dāng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">池中擺尾金魚躍，生活舒心快樂揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 公園漫步</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 遠(yuǎn)望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不見山巒未遇峰，花枝伴水綠新濃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">橋邊浪拍客船過，亭岸休閑老少逢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老伊春新特色(古風(fēng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蒼山（盛軍）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">興安逶迤老伊春，浩瀚林海三代人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">匯集東西南北中，報(bào)效祖國(guó)獻(xiàn)忠貞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">當(dāng)年會(huì)戰(zhàn)機(jī)馬牛，暑往寒來特艱辛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如今到了新時(shí)代，踐行領(lǐng)袖兩山論。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">生態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)型多樣化，林下經(jīng)濟(jì)遠(yuǎn)近聞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龍江向北新高地，標(biāo)榜世博大寫真。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冷經(jīng)濟(jì)啊熱效應(yīng)，文旅融合再打拼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">南聯(lián)北通上擋次，最是林都酒旗新！</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">杭州南宋御街河坊街游記(古風(fēng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">常剛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">杭州南宋御街行，青石深巷別樣情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">水道清渠戲錦鯉，城隍牌樓隱鐘聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">慶余堂內(nèi)搗藥香，鳳凰寺院聽鳥鳴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">亭臺(tái)閑坐慢品茶，沁人心脾綠龍井。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">河坊街畔夕陽紅，信步漫游逛古城。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">南宋書房育才子，定勝糕點(diǎn)望題名。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">村上西湖碧茶香，杭派餅酥甜味濃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高墻樓頭飄旌旗，回首千年念英雄。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、唱和詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">魚游春水*小滿(無名氏體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依依楊柳舞。草長(zhǎng)鶯飛蛙響鼓。青松白樺，峻嶺青山綠樹。潺潺河水蕩清波，呷呷池塘游野鶩。嬌艷百花，秀容妍嫵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紫燕修巢入戶。俊鳥紛飛棲木住。莊家農(nóng)事繁忙，田間吃苦。稻田插秧麥鋤草，雙手勾描豐收譜。抓緊節(jié)氣，豈能耽誤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩【魚游春水?小滿】（新韻-無名氏體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">呢喃麻燕舞，側(cè)耳聆聽蟾打鼓。長(zhǎng)河沃野，綠水青山翠樹。偏東江橋和諧過，濕地歡歌騰鷗鶩。嬌媚艷陽，景觀妍嫵。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">望眼鄉(xiāng)村各戶，犬守房屋門鎖住。農(nóng)民地里耕耘，畦間刻苦。大田機(jī)犁藥鋤草，風(fēng)伴瑤琴撫韻譜。爭(zhēng)搶節(jié)氣，不能延誤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">畫堂春*小滿(秦觀體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">時(shí)維淺夏小興安。青山翠嶺藍(lán)天。俗言小滿雀來全。展翅翩躚。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大好風(fēng)光無限，踏青賞景休閑。鮮花野鶩水潺潺。爽醉心田。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩【畫堂春?小滿】（新韻-依秦觀體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">適逢孟廈北國(guó)安，豐畦翠野青天。北方遷徙鳥來全。亮羽蹁躚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">望眼層林涂綠，含情脈脈悠閑。山清畦麗水潺潺。流向心田。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕?醉美荷塘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">熏風(fēng)撫動(dòng)柳煙揚(yáng)，菡萏花開嫩蕊黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">翠傘舒張漣水碧，鶯聲蛙鼓戲鴛鴦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七絕?醉美荷塘》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏風(fēng)彈菡韻悠揚(yáng)，潑灑甘霖潤(rùn)蕊黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夫婦荷塘圓舊夢(mèng)，多情水鳥系鴛鴦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕. 相思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">熏風(fēng)霽雨掠清波，無助紅顏憾事多。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尺素含情銜淚寫，思君鵲渡赴云河。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七絕?相思》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云煙罩水蕩清波，無奈姝媛煩惱多。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">撐傘凝眸瞧對(duì)岸，想君何日返心河。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七絕·相思》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和風(fēng)細(xì)雨舞清波，情篤嬌姝疑惑多。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依岸沉思觀逝水，纏綿往事亂心河。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕?感懷小滿（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">巒峰臥水襯蒼天，小滿迎來候鳥還。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">情侶同歡同筑夢(mèng)，靈魂深處愛承傳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和衣非老師《七絕·感懷小滿》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云空倒映水中天，坡秀山青引鳥還。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">舊侶新歡情穩(wěn)固，相親如蜜愛承傳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕. 題圖《惜別》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜色蒼溟物感時(shí)，送君橋畔悔來遲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃花灑落付流水，唯有蟾光照我知。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師題圖《七絕?惜別》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">借得風(fēng)月送君時(shí)，緊趕慢行還是遲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">隱隱約約拱橋現(xiàn)，癡情倩女昊天知。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韻吳老題圖《惜別》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傘立昏河垂暮時(shí)，殘紅紛墜意遲遲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春心已付波中月，別后天涯愿爾知。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">原韻奉和吳華彪老師題圖絕句《惜別》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蘇秀云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月色朦朧傷感時(shí)，橋邊相別卻來遲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">惟祈錦字飛鴻遞，默看搖風(fēng)楊柳枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕. 初夏及時(shí)雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">方覺檐頭颯颯風(fēng)，曉知細(xì)雨演溟濛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天公潤(rùn)物多恩惠，免卻黎民對(duì)景忡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七絕?初夏及時(shí)雨》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">甘霖漫灑伴和風(fēng)，潤(rùn)陌澤禾昊宇濛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">染綠畦田涂翠野，終于了卻庶民忡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律. 初夏游</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">煦風(fēng)撫夏草榛萋，踏賞游山拄杖藜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萬道金霞穿碧樹，千重彩岫伴丹溪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">黃鶯婉囀嬌柔舞，白鶴翱翔秀勁啼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閬苑縈懷心淺醉，留連坐忘艷陽低。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七律?初夏游》（新韻-嵌句詩）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">骨傷康復(fù)即瞻萋，覽野游巒靠杖藜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昊宇傾輝如烈焰，層林染翠若丹溪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">駐足觀看蝴蝶舞，側(cè)耳聆聽候鳥啼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳老出行心倍爽，留連坐忘艷陽低。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七律·初夏游》（新韻-嵌句詩）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">外出游覽草苗萋，腿腳雖康倚杖藜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">榴火燒云傾烈焰，榆錢浮水漫丹溪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燕穿樓宇追蜓舞，鳥落枝丫亮嗓啼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳老觀光情緒爽，留連坐忘艷陽低。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">芰荷香*立夏(萬俟詠體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小興安。恰風(fēng)光璀璨，五色斑斕。柳青松翠，杜鵑花海嫣妍。鶯歌燕舞，更有那、流水潺潺。美扮峻嶺青山。時(shí)維立夏，景俏人歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">細(xì)雨濛濛遍地灑，醉荒原芳草，千畝農(nóng)田。肥肥黑土，放眸阡陌無邊。禾苗罩垅，夏來了、綠滿山川。鄉(xiāng)村喜氣連連。田間細(xì)作，企盼豐年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韻刁老前輩【芰荷香?立夏】（新韻-萬俟詠體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">北疆安。望巒峰旖旎，色彩斒斕。巷青街綠，紫丁香秀桃妍。蜂鳴蝶吮，再聽那、溪水淙潺。美飾冰城群山。適逢立夏，萬類狂歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云化甘霖處處灑，潤(rùn)南坡北界，千頃良田。水肥土沃，濃香馥郁無邊。發(fā)芽吐葉，情悅賞、滿眼芳川。村寨喜訊接連。勤耕細(xì)作，再創(chuàng)豐年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩《芰荷香·立夏》（新韻-萬俟詠體）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寨村安?？雌路寰G染，景色斑斕。小區(qū)街巷，柳枝蒼翠梨妍。鶯飛穿樹，近聞那、河水流潺。雨沐城郭荒山。節(jié)迎立夏，萬物言歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云聚靈澤細(xì)細(xì)灑，浴房前嶺后，滋潤(rùn)畦田。黝黑沃土，芳香廣闊無邊。秧苗秀葉，人鼓舞、悅賞江川。鄉(xiāng)鎮(zhèn)好運(yùn)相連。甘霖漫布，兆瑞豐年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【 沁園春】興安立夏吟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 云霞逸客</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春去何匆，荼蘼事了，綠暗紅稀。正杜鵑啼福，柳梢綻碧，蛙聲破寂，鴛影游池。蜂蝶尋芳，新鶯試曲，萬物崢嶸各競(jìng)時(shí)。憑欄處，看山峰疊翠，天瀉驕暉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人間幾度芬菲？嘆駒隙、流光不可追。幸金樽斟滿，河魚正美，笛消永晝，韻引遐思?；眽?mèng)無痕，身心康健，且向書中覓小詩。沉吟久，任風(fēng)撩白發(fā)，自笑愚癡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依韻云霞逸客《[沁園春]興安立夏吟》(蘇軾體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">峻嶺興安，初夏來了，雨稠虹稀。恰和風(fēng)縷縷，莽林泛綠，嬌陽暖暖，野鶩游池。嫩草鋪茵，禾苗破土，達(dá)子香花綻放時(shí)。凝眸望，矚青松聳翠，廣宇噴暉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林都處處芳菲。璀璨景、觀光黎庶追。在長(zhǎng)堤漫步，大河浪涌，方塘垂釣，碧水魚肥。木刻雕園，怪奇石苑，抬首藍(lán)天山雀飛。遍地倩，覽青巒秀水，不愿回歸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕. 題圖《立夏》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">綠柳垂絲曲徑幽，平湖倒影對(duì)孤舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">船家不耐才閑槳，方卸春詩攬夏收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師題圖《七絕?立廈》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳絮輕盈碧水幽，波紋卷浪蕩孤舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">穿行紫燕云空唳，柔影仙池眼底收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師題圖《七絕·立夏》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">綠柳荷花岸畔幽，鱗紋細(xì)浪卷孤舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">空中紫燕嘰喳叫，倒影平湖仙景收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春暮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">季暮途窮時(shí)已闌，興安此刻正妍妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莽林泛綠才繁茂，碧水開封剛緩潺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">播種農(nóng)田鐵牛吼，復(fù)蘇大地艷花鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">末春不老春仍俏，柳翠葩紅始盎然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩《七律?春暮》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非（裴志興）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">節(jié)氣剛溫春已闌，冰城陌上正殷妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">坡峰熠熠山初翠，溝壑清清水緩潺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悅賞長(zhǎng)街桃卉靚，欣瞧小巷柳芽鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此時(shí)村寨忙耘地，播種豐收享自然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩《七律·春暮》（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">節(jié)暮煙春就要闌，硒都園里漸花妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山林遠(yuǎn)看坡著翠，河岸近瞧水緩潺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蝶戀嬌花花扮靚，蜂纏浪蕊蕊生鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此時(shí)耕者正忙季，點(diǎn)種施肥好坦然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔南呂?四塊玉〕山花（新韻）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張建國(guó)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 蜂自來，蝶抬愛，櫻嘴鵑魂柳桃腮。金釵拍照舒眉黛。已看呆，不忍摘，詩夢(mèng)懷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">[南呂*四塊玉]依建國(guó)韻《山花》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 獨(dú)自開，無人采。醉舞蜂蝶奔香來。清風(fēng)朗月身邊在。聽鳥鳴，舒暢懷，真快哉。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四、賞析詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀書三首</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀書1</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嬌陽五月暖風(fēng)馳，正是閑翁展卷時(shí)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漢賦魏吟觀古韻，唐枝宋葉讀佳詩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">翻看不覓顏如玉，品味只求甘若飴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">齒耄雖然年紀(jì)老，嗜書成癖一生癡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀書2</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">暖氣頻吹快速馳，捧書樂讀正當(dāng)時(shí)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">午前品品東坡韻，燈下看看棄疾詞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">律美鏗鏘聲貫耳，句優(yōu)閱覽味如飴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和風(fēng)刮過精神爽，開卷香來情更癡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀書3</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">獨(dú)坐蕓窗神不疲，徜徉卷帙意飛馳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">感如旱地淋甘雨，見若春風(fēng)剪綠枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">少歲勿嫌求學(xué)苦，耄年難改讀書癡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浩繁充棟館藏布，最愛依然唐宋詩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩如其人，癡者自明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">——初讀刁老《讀書三首》的體會(huì)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/胡學(xué)榮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這三首《讀書》詩出自88歲老人刁柏春之手，字里行間洋溢著對(duì)讀書的畢生熱愛與精神追求，既有耄耋之年的通透豁達(dá)，亦含赤子般的純粹癡狂，值得從以下角度細(xì)細(xì)賞析：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一、以詩寫心，勾勒終身嗜書的精神畫像</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 三首詩共同勾勒出一位“讀書癡”的立體形象：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 時(shí)光淬煉的堅(jiān)持：從“少歲勿嫌求學(xué)苦”到“耄年難改讀書癡”（《讀書3》），跨越人生階段的自勉，可見讀書已融入生命軌跡，成為貫穿一生的習(xí)慣。雖“齒耄年紀(jì)老”（《讀書1》），仍“獨(dú)坐蕓窗神不?！保ā蹲x書3》），以“嗜書成癖一生癡”的直白宣言，道破“癡”乃超越功利的純粹熱愛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 古典文學(xué)的鐘情：三詩頻繁聚焦傳統(tǒng)經(jīng)典，“漢賦魏吟”“唐枝宋葉”（《讀書1》）、“東坡韻”“棄疾詞”（《讀書2》）、“唐宋詩”（《讀書3》），既見閱讀脈絡(luò)的縱深，亦顯審美趣味的堅(jiān)守。老人偏愛唐宋詩詞的韻律之美（“律美鏗鏘聲貫耳，句優(yōu)閱覽味如飴”《讀書2》），足見其對(duì)古典文學(xué)韻律與意境的深刻共鳴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 讀書境界的超脫：摒棄“書中自有顏如玉”的功利期待（“翻看不覓顏如玉，品味只求甘若飴”《讀書1》），轉(zhuǎn)而追求“甘若飴”“味如飴”的精神回甘，將讀書升華為滋養(yǎng)心靈的“甘雨”“春風(fēng)”（《讀書3》），體現(xiàn)了“開卷有益”的純粹樂趣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二、詩法凝練，盡顯老筆清健的藝術(shù)功底</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 作為高齡創(chuàng)作者，詩中可見扎實(shí)的格律修養(yǎng)與意象經(jīng)營(yíng)：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 對(duì)仗工整，章法嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 《讀書1》中“漢賦魏吟”對(duì)“唐枝宋葉”，以朝代代指文體，凝練概括古典文學(xué)脈絡(luò)；“翻看不覓”對(duì)“品味只求”，以否定與肯定的對(duì)照，凸顯讀書初心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 《讀書2》“午前品品”對(duì)“燈下看看”，以口語化疊詞寫日常讀書場(chǎng)景，親切自然；“律美鏗鏘”對(duì)“句優(yōu)閱覽”，從聽覺與視覺角度分述讀詩感受，層次分明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 意象鮮活，比喻精妙：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 以“嬌陽五月”“暖氣頻吹”“和風(fēng)刮過”等季節(jié)意象烘托讀書時(shí)的愜意氛圍，賦予抽象的閱讀體驗(yàn)以具體的感官溫度；</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> “感如旱地淋甘雨，見若春風(fēng)剪綠枝”（《讀書3》），將讀書的啟迪比作甘霖潤(rùn)旱、春風(fēng)裁綠，既貼合老人歷經(jīng)世事的人生感悟，又暗合“潤(rùn)物細(xì)無聲”的知識(shí)滋養(yǎng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 語言質(zhì)樸，情致動(dòng)人：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩風(fēng)不事雕琢，以“閑翁”“樂讀”“神不疲”等口語化表達(dá)，傳遞真實(shí)自然的情感。如“開卷香來情更癡”（《讀書2》），一個(gè)“香”字虛實(shí)相生，既指書卷墨香，更喻精神芬芳，收束處情韻悠長(zhǎng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、老而彌堅(jiān)，傳遞積極向上的生命態(tài)度</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 三首詩最動(dòng)人處，在于打破“暮年衰頹”的刻板印象，展現(xiàn)“老驥伏櫪”的精神氣象：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 年齡與熱忱的反差：“齒?！薄半Ｄ辍钡仍~點(diǎn)明高齡，卻無絲毫消沉，反以“展卷時(shí)”“正當(dāng)時(shí)”“神不?！钡确e極狀態(tài)形成對(duì)比，傳遞“活到老、讀到老”的生命韌性。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 精神世界的富足：雖未直言世事滄桑，卻通過“徜徉卷帙意飛馳”（《讀書3》）的自由馳騁，暗示讀書已成為對(duì)抗歲月流逝的精神依托。“浩繁充棟館藏布”（《讀書3》）既寫藏書之豐，亦暗指知識(shí)世界的浩瀚，老人置身其中，雖老而心自年輕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>結(jié)語：詩如其人，癡者自明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 刁柏春的三首《讀書》詩，是一位耋耄老人以詩為鏡的自我觀照：他讀的是唐宋詩詞，守的是終身學(xué)習(xí)的初心，癡的是文字背后的精神原鄉(xiāng)。詩中沒有宏大敘事，卻以個(gè)人化的閱讀體驗(yàn)，道破讀書最本真的意義——無關(guān)年齡，無關(guān)功利，唯有熱愛本身，如春風(fēng)化雨，滋養(yǎng)一生。這份“嗜書成癖”的癡，既是老人的精神注腳，亦為后世傳遞了一份關(guān)于讀書與生命的溫暖啟示。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五、結(jié)卷詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五月端陽(七律兩首)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">端午節(jié)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">星移日轉(zhuǎn)又端陽，華夏文明萬古長(zhǎng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">艾草插門驅(qū)疾疫，葫蘆懸牖佑安康。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">繩纏糯粽鍋中煮，壁掛荷包屋里香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">緬念屈平身殉國(guó)，龍舟競(jìng)賽祭忠良。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">祭屈原</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">汨羅河水記端陽，屈子高風(fēng)萬古揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">抱石投江身殉國(guó)，盡忠厚德業(yè)留芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">英魂赤膽地天鑒，《橘頌》《離騷》日月長(zhǎng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">佳節(jié)黎民誠(chéng)祭奠，名垂青史放靈光。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">主辦：律詩審稿組</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">策劃：刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">編輯：吳華彪 陳國(guó)田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">制版兼審核：陳國(guó)田</span></p>