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休閑詩詞(第184期)

海闊天空

<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 目 錄</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、開卷詩 二、選粹詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、唱和詩 四、賞析詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五、結(jié)卷詩</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一、開卷詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">端午節(jié)小景</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">晨曦乍現(xiàn)夏風(fēng)涼,接踵觀光著盛妝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">愿佑明眸爭(zhēng)洗露,靈均駐足早尋香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">注:靈均,屈原的字。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">童趣. (新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">笑賞平湖偶適閑,心潮蕩漾憶韶年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春節(jié)燈火迎神靜,夏至河流戲鯉歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">迷藏臥蜷秋色地,鼓書唱彈雪冰天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)華已逝蒼髯叟,老驥徒籌躍嶺巒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小滿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">楊柳搖風(fēng)百囀鳴,膏腴沃土喚深耕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">適時(shí)競(jìng)種禾苗潤(rùn),補(bǔ)缺全栽葉脈清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">壟壟苞蘆期拔節(jié),田田水稻孕新英。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">耘犁春夏農(nóng)心暢,汗灑金疇別樣情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">行香子?無憂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人至稀齡,無悔無憂。嘆浮生意志難酬。誰能恩賜,喜樂春秋。愿春長(zhǎng)駐,花長(zhǎng)艷,水長(zhǎng)流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">黃昏得趣,殘陽歸岫,看波濤洶涌奔流。樓橋輝映,醉染雙眸。更草如茵,樹如蓋,月如鉤。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二、選粹詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">再游曲江池</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">朱力平</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">時(shí)隔三載再游園,綠柳飄飄今又還。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">江水春容靈動(dòng)在,誰識(shí)舊客站池前!</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">珠簾卷?游杜鵑花海</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鄭坤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 春風(fēng)暖,杜鵑妍。山巒百里斑斕。多色交融如畫,群蜂嬉蕊歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 男士女郎情綻,花香意醉綿綿。忘卻此間煩惱,身照靚,舞姿翩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鷓鴣天?貴州百里杜鵑</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張建國(guó)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 鋪天畫卷接天陲,匠心裁作錦香幃。殷紅百里金坡焰,柔媚三春普底暉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 風(fēng)慢拂,浪輕推,花魂暗惹客難歸。千年一吻群芳妒,不戀瑤池戀此妃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔南南呂·一剪梅〕詩情畫意小興安(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">賀聲林</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 綠色興安畫意濃,城在林中,林在城中?;t杉綠草青青,鳥叫聲聲,鹿叫鳴鳴。(前腔)?上紅松白樺生,郁郁蔥蔥,密密層層。城樓人影攬星星,情意濃濃,詩意濃濃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 當(dāng)街花墻</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">胡學(xué)榮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">薔薇月季竹笆芒,墻內(nèi)開花墻外香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雨后風(fēng)前嬌容顫,迎來送往物情忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">一枝獨(dú)秀玉簪立,萬朵交輝環(huán)佩鏘。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">觸手可親猶自愛,美腴與共護(hù)春光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">釵頭鳳?感 懷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蘇秀云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 荷花俏。榴花鬧。歷風(fēng)經(jīng)雨形蹤渺。幽緒卷。遐思亂。縷縷陳情,至今難斷。戀。戀。戀。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 青春老。伊人曉。幾多幽愫猶難了。何需怨,夙情伴。初衷仍在,但求如愿。盼。盼。盼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏游</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">鞠馥陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">喜鵲翀吟旋谷灣,聳崖陡麓飾新顏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">興安抖峭憑云繞,呼水揚(yáng)波任霧環(huán)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">艷艷紅花搖雨靚,幽幽綠柳舞風(fēng)斕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">無垠阡陌嵐煙渺,詞嫗詩翁醉忘還。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老友歡聚一堂</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">金淑芳</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">久別重逢歡樂盛,相逢一笑溫暖生。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">杯中酒滿情難盡,席上言歡意未平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">往事如煙隨夢(mèng)遠(yuǎn),新程似錦待心耕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今宵莫問歸何處,且把歡聲寄月明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 杏花節(jié)吟(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">郭曉春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">東風(fēng)駘蕩杏花天,萬樹彤云照眼鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蝶戀芳叢枝上舞,鶯啼繡野客中穿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">香浮曲徑苔痕綠,影落清溪錦浪翻。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莫負(fù)韶華春正好,簪英酹酒效詩仙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山花子·憶母親(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萬國(guó)華</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 縈繞孩提記憶真,燈前縫補(bǔ)到更深。弱體遮風(fēng)多少載,滿堂春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 育子仁德勤教誨,治家儉樸任艱辛。慈母恩情無以報(bào),淚紛紛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尋梅</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">薛淑春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">雪覆松山蘊(yùn)蕊時(shí),深根堅(jiān)骨任風(fēng)欺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不爭(zhēng)嬌貌早春報(bào),少有清香遠(yuǎn)客知。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">經(jīng)歷苦寒花未落,貪觀新秀叟來遲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尋她幽谷芳容現(xiàn),了卻三冬晝夜思。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">頌秦始皇(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">穿越時(shí)空話始皇,深謀遠(yuǎn)慮治國(guó)強(qiáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">征服六域名華夏,繪畫一幀鐫史章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文字相同千古頌,度量規(guī)范萬年揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">長(zhǎng)城腳下回音壁,閃耀豐碑百世芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吟朝陽</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">李相文</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">東君神韻嶺巔生,璀璨霞輝耀眼明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">玉宇云飛飄靄霧,群巒樹舞繞鵑鶯。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)搖翠葉花枝茂,雨蕩浮塵苑圃清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漫步長(zhǎng)堤迎旭日,心怡雅興賦詩行。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">畫堂春.茉莉花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">呂彬華</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">姝容仙態(tài)美嬌娘,冰姿淡雅芬芳。暖風(fēng)吹過滿園香,蝶醉蜂狂。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">疑似綠叢飄雪,恰如寸隙斜陽。梅魂菊影透頑強(qiáng),縈繞心房。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏日抒懷</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">細(xì)品歲月</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">野村縈紫靄,松徑伴流泉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">風(fēng)驟催時(shí)雨,陰濃藏沫蟬。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">結(jié)廬云盡處,品茗柳槐前。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">俯仰觀奇景,歌吟憑自然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">星海廣場(chǎng)飼鷗</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 范連韌</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">深海藍(lán)潮映日紅,長(zhǎng)橋橫跨勢(shì)標(biāo)雄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">游人搶鏡金堤上,群鳥銜糧玉手中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">展翅精靈穿曉霧,嚶聲雅態(tài)帶清風(fēng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此身暫與塵囂遠(yuǎn),心共云鷗遨碧空。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詠蘭草花</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">劉文波</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">谷澗滋生蘭草花,迎風(fēng)起舞展芳華。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">甘為曠野添春意,盡潤(rùn)群山沐晚霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">絢麗嬌顏招眾愛,移栽盆景惹人夸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">英姿醉在林園里,秀色常留百姓家。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">贈(zèng)詩友</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">琴韻瀟湘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">今生不悔賦辭修,共處還看趣味投。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">下筆抒懷忘怨句,成詩解意有佳儔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">與君相遇梅蘭并,結(jié)伴無猜菊竹遒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">綺夢(mèng)同題情繾綣,伯牙琴奏水山流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">西江月?屈子淚(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">周亞元</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 萬古汨羅增恨,千年老樹逢春。國(guó)亡身殞楚人心,欲與沉冤誰論?</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 水上龍舟并進(jìn),空中鳶鳥齊跟。菖蒲雄酒祭英魂,更有《九歌》《天問》。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔雙調(diào)?落梅風(fēng)〕孟夏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山清水秀</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春留步,鵑綻蕾,絮飄空柳搖風(fēng)媚。釣人倚竿波映暉,暮煙中隕星劃墜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">湘西張家界</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老疙瘩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">君意升仙夢(mèng)久空,輪回期盼有無中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">與卿遠(yuǎn)隔三千載,多少相思化碧峰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">釵頭鳳?初夏</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 于 發(fā)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 新荷燦,蘆枝亂,蕙風(fēng)吹露田園顯。群山草,天空鳥,夜空明月九州高照。妙,妙,妙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 銀珠見,家人喚,雨淋身上如香汗。農(nóng)夫好,夏初早,機(jī)車翻土搶耕時(shí)到。巧,巧,巧。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">興安杜鵑花(通韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老真</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">平生最愛大石砬,甘守貧窮氣自華。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">最喜春風(fēng)來作客,舉杯滿面散紅霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">竹</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">姜濤</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">葉盛花窮各有詞,山高澗險(xiǎn)任由之。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">新尖執(zhí)意懷春夢(mèng),老筍無心到夏時(shí)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">正眼芊身藏傲骨,傳言節(jié)外又生枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">清風(fēng)也可吹斜霧,褒貶多來少作詩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寫在AI詩潮到來之際</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張慧</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刻苦學(xué)詩并不慌,豈容A l倒幫忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寧憑半月敲三句,甭用須臾寫一章。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">應(yīng)免文壇添亂事,難禁假冒仿初唐。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">揮毫守份凡塵禮,地氣邀仙慰夕陽。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">致敬白衣天使</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">馬占河</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燕帽白衣燦爛容,嬌姿柔體步輕盈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">扶傷祛痛真心獻(xiàn),濟(jì)世懸壺妙手呈。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">纖手輕輕撫病患,深情脈脈止悲聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">可欣天使無含怨,普渡蒼黎苦海中。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">江南水郡小區(qū)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">肖國(guó)發(fā)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">修竹根根路兩旁,小橋流水響叮當(dāng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">池中擺尾金魚躍,生活舒心快樂揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 公園漫步</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 遠(yuǎn)望</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">不見山巒未遇峰,花枝伴水綠新濃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">橋邊浪拍客船過,亭岸休閑老少逢。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">老伊春新特色(古風(fēng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蒼山(盛軍)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">興安逶迤老伊春,浩瀚林海三代人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">匯集東西南北中,報(bào)效祖國(guó)獻(xiàn)忠貞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">當(dāng)年會(huì)戰(zhàn)機(jī)馬牛,暑往寒來特艱辛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">如今到了新時(shí)代,踐行領(lǐng)袖兩山論。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">生態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)型多樣化,林下經(jīng)濟(jì)遠(yuǎn)近聞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">龍江向北新高地,標(biāo)榜世博大寫真。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">冷經(jīng)濟(jì)啊熱效應(yīng),文旅融合再打拼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">南聯(lián)北通上擋次,最是林都酒旗新!</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">杭州南宋御街河坊街游記(古風(fēng))</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">常剛</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">杭州南宋御街行,青石深巷別樣情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">水道清渠戲錦鯉,城隍牌樓隱鐘聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">慶余堂內(nèi)搗藥香,鳳凰寺院聽鳥鳴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">亭臺(tái)閑坐慢品茶,沁人心脾綠龍井。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 二</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">河坊街畔夕陽紅,信步漫游逛古城。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">南宋書房育才子,定勝糕點(diǎn)望題名。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">村上西湖碧茶香,杭派餅酥甜味濃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">高墻樓頭飄旌旗,回首千年念英雄。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、唱和詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">魚游春水*小滿(無名氏體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依依楊柳舞。草長(zhǎng)鶯飛蛙響鼓。青松白樺,峻嶺青山綠樹。潺潺河水蕩清波,呷呷池塘游野鶩。嬌艷百花,秀容妍嫵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">紫燕修巢入戶。俊鳥紛飛棲木住。莊家農(nóng)事繁忙,田間吃苦。稻田插秧麥鋤草,雙手勾描豐收譜。抓緊節(jié)氣,豈能耽誤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩【魚游春水?小滿】(新韻-無名氏體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">呢喃麻燕舞,側(cè)耳聆聽蟾打鼓。長(zhǎng)河沃野,綠水青山翠樹。偏東江橋和諧過,濕地歡歌騰鷗鶩。嬌媚艷陽,景觀妍嫵。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">望眼鄉(xiāng)村各戶,犬守房屋門鎖住。農(nóng)民地里耕耘,畦間刻苦。大田機(jī)犁藥鋤草,風(fēng)伴瑤琴撫韻譜。爭(zhēng)搶節(jié)氣,不能延誤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">畫堂春*小滿(秦觀體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">時(shí)維淺夏小興安。青山翠嶺藍(lán)天。俗言小滿雀來全。展翅翩躚。 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">大好風(fēng)光無限,踏青賞景休閑。鮮花野鶩水潺潺。爽醉心田。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩【畫堂春?小滿】(新韻-依秦觀體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">適逢孟廈北國(guó)安,豐畦翠野青天。北方遷徙鳥來全。亮羽蹁躚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">望眼層林涂綠,含情脈脈悠閑。山清畦麗水潺潺。流向心田。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕?醉美荷塘</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">熏風(fēng)撫動(dòng)柳煙揚(yáng),菡萏花開嫩蕊黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">翠傘舒張漣水碧,鶯聲蛙鼓戲鴛鴦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七絕?醉美荷塘》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夏風(fēng)彈菡韻悠揚(yáng),潑灑甘霖潤(rùn)蕊黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夫婦荷塘圓舊夢(mèng),多情水鳥系鴛鴦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕. 相思</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">熏風(fēng)霽雨掠清波,無助紅顏憾事多。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">尺素含情銜淚寫,思君鵲渡赴云河。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七絕?相思》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云煙罩水蕩清波,無奈姝媛煩惱多。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">撐傘凝眸瞧對(duì)岸,想君何日返心河。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七絕·相思》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和風(fēng)細(xì)雨舞清波,情篤嬌姝疑惑多。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依岸沉思觀逝水,纏綿往事亂心河。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕?感懷小滿(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">巒峰臥水襯蒼天,小滿迎來候鳥還。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">情侶同歡同筑夢(mèng),靈魂深處愛承傳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和衣非老師《七絕·感懷小滿》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云空倒映水中天,坡秀山青引鳥還。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">舊侶新歡情穩(wěn)固,相親如蜜愛承傳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕. 題圖《惜別》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">夜色蒼溟物感時(shí),送君橋畔悔來遲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">桃花灑落付流水,唯有蟾光照我知。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師題圖《七絕?惜別》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">借得風(fēng)月送君時(shí),緊趕慢行還是遲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">隱隱約約拱橋現(xiàn),癡情倩女昊天知。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韻吳老題圖《惜別》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">傘立昏河垂暮時(shí),殘紅紛墜意遲遲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春心已付波中月,別后天涯愿爾知。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">原韻奉和吳華彪老師題圖絕句《惜別》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蘇秀云</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">月色朦朧傷感時(shí),橋邊相別卻來遲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">惟祈錦字飛鴻遞,默看搖風(fēng)楊柳枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕. 初夏及時(shí)雨</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">方覺檐頭颯颯風(fēng),曉知細(xì)雨演溟濛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">天公潤(rùn)物多恩惠,免卻黎民對(duì)景忡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七絕?初夏及時(shí)雨》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">甘霖漫灑伴和風(fēng),潤(rùn)陌澤禾昊宇濛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">染綠畦田涂翠野,終于了卻庶民忡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七律. 初夏游</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">煦風(fēng)撫夏草榛萋,踏賞游山拄杖藜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">萬道金霞穿碧樹,千重彩岫伴丹溪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">黃鶯婉囀嬌柔舞,白鶴翱翔秀勁啼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">閬苑縈懷心淺醉,留連坐忘艷陽低。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七律?初夏游》(新韻-嵌句詩)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">骨傷康復(fù)即瞻萋,覽野游巒靠杖藜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">昊宇傾輝如烈焰,層林染翠若丹溪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">駐足觀看蝴蝶舞,側(cè)耳聆聽候鳥啼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳老出行心倍爽,留連坐忘艷陽低。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師《七律·初夏游》(新韻-嵌句詩)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">外出游覽草苗萋,腿腳雖康倚杖藜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">榴火燒云傾烈焰,榆錢浮水漫丹溪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">燕穿樓宇追蜓舞,鳥落枝丫亮嗓啼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳老觀光情緒爽,留連坐忘艷陽低。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">芰荷香*立夏(萬俟詠體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">小興安。恰風(fēng)光璀璨,五色斑斕。柳青松翠,杜鵑花海嫣妍。鶯歌燕舞,更有那、流水潺潺。美扮峻嶺青山。時(shí)維立夏,景俏人歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">細(xì)雨濛濛遍地灑,醉荒原芳草,千畝農(nóng)田。肥肥黑土,放眸阡陌無邊。禾苗罩垅,夏來了、綠滿山川。鄉(xiāng)村喜氣連連。田間細(xì)作,企盼豐年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">步韻刁老前輩【芰荷香?立夏】(新韻-萬俟詠體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">北疆安。望巒峰旖旎,色彩斒斕。巷青街綠,紫丁香秀桃妍。蜂鳴蝶吮,再聽那、溪水淙潺。美飾冰城群山。適逢立夏,萬類狂歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云化甘霖處處灑,潤(rùn)南坡北界,千頃良田。水肥土沃,濃香馥郁無邊。發(fā)芽吐葉,情悅賞、滿眼芳川。村寨喜訊接連。勤耕細(xì)作,再創(chuàng)豐年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩《芰荷香·立夏》(新韻-萬俟詠體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">寨村安??雌路寰G染,景色斑斕。小區(qū)街巷,柳枝蒼翠梨妍。鶯飛穿樹,近聞那、河水流潺。雨沐城郭荒山。節(jié)迎立夏,萬物言歡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">云聚靈澤細(xì)細(xì)灑,浴房前嶺后,滋潤(rùn)畦田。黝黑沃土,芳香廣闊無邊。秧苗秀葉,人鼓舞、悅賞江川。鄉(xiāng)鎮(zhèn)好運(yùn)相連。甘霖漫布,兆瑞豐年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">【 沁園春】興安立夏吟</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 云霞逸客</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春去何匆,荼蘼事了,綠暗紅稀。正杜鵑啼福,柳梢綻碧,蛙聲破寂,鴛影游池。蜂蝶尋芳,新鶯試曲,萬物崢嶸各競(jìng)時(shí)。憑欄處,看山峰疊翠,天瀉驕暉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">人間幾度芬菲?嘆駒隙、流光不可追。幸金樽斟滿,河魚正美,笛消永晝,韻引遐思?;眽?mèng)無痕,身心康健,且向書中覓小詩。沉吟久,任風(fēng)撩白發(fā),自笑愚癡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">依韻云霞逸客《[沁園春]興安立夏吟》(蘇軾體)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">峻嶺興安,初夏來了,雨稠虹稀。恰和風(fēng)縷縷,莽林泛綠,嬌陽暖暖,野鶩游池。嫩草鋪茵,禾苗破土,達(dá)子香花綻放時(shí)。凝眸望,矚青松聳翠,廣宇噴暉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">林都處處芳菲。璀璨景、觀光黎庶追。在長(zhǎng)堤漫步,大河浪涌,方塘垂釣,碧水魚肥。木刻雕園,怪奇石苑,抬首藍(lán)天山雀飛。遍地倩,覽青巒秀水,不愿回歸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">七絕. 題圖《立夏》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">吳華彪</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">綠柳垂絲曲徑幽,平湖倒影對(duì)孤舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">船家不耐才閑槳,方卸春詩攬夏收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師題圖《七絕?立廈》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">柳絮輕盈碧水幽,波紋卷浪蕩孤舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">穿行紫燕云空唳,柔影仙池眼底收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和吳老師題圖《七絕·立夏》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">綠柳荷花岸畔幽,鱗紋細(xì)浪卷孤舟。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">空中紫燕嘰喳叫,倒影平湖仙景收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">春暮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">季暮途窮時(shí)已闌,興安此刻正妍妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">莽林泛綠才繁茂,碧水開封剛緩潺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">播種農(nóng)田鐵牛吼,復(fù)蘇大地艷花鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">末春不老春仍俏,柳翠葩紅始盎然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩《七律?春暮》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">衣非(裴志興)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">節(jié)氣剛溫春已闌,冰城陌上正殷妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">坡峰熠熠山初翠,溝壑清清水緩潺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">悅賞長(zhǎng)街桃卉靚,欣瞧小巷柳芽鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此時(shí)村寨忙耘地,播種豐收享自然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和刁老前輩《七律·春暮》(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">陳國(guó)忠</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">節(jié)暮煙春就要闌,硒都園里漸花妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">山林遠(yuǎn)看坡著翠,河岸近瞧水緩潺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">蝶戀嬌花花扮靚,蜂纏浪蕊蕊生鮮。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">此時(shí)耕者正忙季,點(diǎn)種施肥好坦然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">〔南呂?四塊玉〕山花(新韻)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">張建國(guó)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 蜂自來,蝶抬愛,櫻嘴鵑魂柳桃腮。金釵拍照舒眉黛。已看呆,不忍摘,詩夢(mèng)懷。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">[南呂*四塊玉]依建國(guó)韻《山花》</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 獨(dú)自開,無人采。醉舞蜂蝶奔香來。清風(fēng)朗月身邊在。聽鳥鳴,舒暢懷,真快哉。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">四、賞析詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀書三首</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀書1</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">嬌陽五月暖風(fēng)馳,正是閑翁展卷時(shí)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">漢賦魏吟觀古韻,唐枝宋葉讀佳詩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">翻看不覓顏如玉,品味只求甘若飴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">齒耄雖然年紀(jì)老,嗜書成癖一生癡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀書2</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">暖氣頻吹快速馳,捧書樂讀正當(dāng)時(shí)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">午前品品東坡韻,燈下看看棄疾詞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">律美鏗鏘聲貫耳,句優(yōu)閱覽味如飴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">和風(fēng)刮過精神爽,開卷香來情更癡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">讀書3</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">獨(dú)坐蕓窗神不疲,徜徉卷帙意飛馳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">感如旱地淋甘雨,見若春風(fēng)剪綠枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">少歲勿嫌求學(xué)苦,耄年難改讀書癡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">浩繁充棟館藏布,最愛依然唐宋詩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩如其人,癡者自明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">——初讀刁老《讀書三首》的體會(huì)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">文/胡學(xué)榮</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">這三首《讀書》詩出自88歲老人刁柏春之手,字里行間洋溢著對(duì)讀書的畢生熱愛與精神追求,既有耄耋之年的通透豁達(dá),亦含赤子般的純粹癡狂,值得從以下角度細(xì)細(xì)賞析:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 一、以詩寫心,勾勒終身嗜書的精神畫像</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 三首詩共同勾勒出一位“讀書癡”的立體形象:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 時(shí)光淬煉的堅(jiān)持:從“少歲勿嫌求學(xué)苦”到“耄年難改讀書癡”(《讀書3》),跨越人生階段的自勉,可見讀書已融入生命軌跡,成為貫穿一生的習(xí)慣。雖“齒耄年紀(jì)老”(《讀書1》),仍“獨(dú)坐蕓窗神不?!保ā蹲x書3》),以“嗜書成癖一生癡”的直白宣言,道破“癡”乃超越功利的純粹熱愛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 古典文學(xué)的鐘情:三詩頻繁聚焦傳統(tǒng)經(jīng)典,“漢賦魏吟”“唐枝宋葉”(《讀書1》)、“東坡韻”“棄疾詞”(《讀書2》)、“唐宋詩”(《讀書3》),既見閱讀脈絡(luò)的縱深,亦顯審美趣味的堅(jiān)守。老人偏愛唐宋詩詞的韻律之美(“律美鏗鏘聲貫耳,句優(yōu)閱覽味如飴”《讀書2》),足見其對(duì)古典文學(xué)韻律與意境的深刻共鳴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 讀書境界的超脫:摒棄“書中自有顏如玉”的功利期待(“翻看不覓顏如玉,品味只求甘若飴”《讀書1》),轉(zhuǎn)而追求“甘若飴”“味如飴”的精神回甘,將讀書升華為滋養(yǎng)心靈的“甘雨”“春風(fēng)”(《讀書3》),體現(xiàn)了“開卷有益”的純粹樂趣。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">二、詩法凝練,盡顯老筆清健的藝術(shù)功底</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 作為高齡創(chuàng)作者,詩中可見扎實(shí)的格律修養(yǎng)與意象經(jīng)營(yíng):</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 對(duì)仗工整,章法嚴(yán)謹(jǐn):</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 《讀書1》中“漢賦魏吟”對(duì)“唐枝宋葉”,以朝代代指文體,凝練概括古典文學(xué)脈絡(luò);“翻看不覓”對(duì)“品味只求”,以否定與肯定的對(duì)照,凸顯讀書初心。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 《讀書2》“午前品品”對(duì)“燈下看看”,以口語化疊詞寫日常讀書場(chǎng)景,親切自然;“律美鏗鏘”對(duì)“句優(yōu)閱覽”,從聽覺與視覺角度分述讀詩感受,層次分明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 意象鮮活,比喻精妙:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 以“嬌陽五月”“暖氣頻吹”“和風(fēng)刮過”等季節(jié)意象烘托讀書時(shí)的愜意氛圍,賦予抽象的閱讀體驗(yàn)以具體的感官溫度;</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> “感如旱地淋甘雨,見若春風(fēng)剪綠枝”(《讀書3》),將讀書的啟迪比作甘霖潤(rùn)旱、春風(fēng)裁綠,既貼合老人歷經(jīng)世事的人生感悟,又暗合“潤(rùn)物細(xì)無聲”的知識(shí)滋養(yǎng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 語言質(zhì)樸,情致動(dòng)人:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">詩風(fēng)不事雕琢,以“閑翁”“樂讀”“神不疲”等口語化表達(dá),傳遞真實(shí)自然的情感。如“開卷香來情更癡”(《讀書2》),一個(gè)“香”字虛實(shí)相生,既指書卷墨香,更喻精神芬芳,收束處情韻悠長(zhǎng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">三、老而彌堅(jiān),傳遞積極向上的生命態(tài)度</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 三首詩最動(dòng)人處,在于打破“暮年衰頹”的刻板印象,展現(xiàn)“老驥伏櫪”的精神氣象:</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 年齡與熱忱的反差:“齒?!薄半D辍钡仍~點(diǎn)明高齡,卻無絲毫消沉,反以“展卷時(shí)”“正當(dāng)時(shí)”“神不?!钡确e極狀態(tài)形成對(duì)比,傳遞“活到老、讀到老”的生命韌性。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 精神世界的富足:雖未直言世事滄桑,卻通過“徜徉卷帙意飛馳”(《讀書3》)的自由馳騁,暗示讀書已成為對(duì)抗歲月流逝的精神依托。“浩繁充棟館藏布”(《讀書3》)既寫藏書之豐,亦暗指知識(shí)世界的浩瀚,老人置身其中,雖老而心自年輕。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span>結(jié)語:詩如其人,癡者自明</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;"> 刁柏春的三首《讀書》詩,是一位耋耄老人以詩為鏡的自我觀照:他讀的是唐宋詩詞,守的是終身學(xué)習(xí)的初心,癡的是文字背后的精神原鄉(xiāng)。詩中沒有宏大敘事,卻以個(gè)人化的閱讀體驗(yàn),道破讀書最本真的意義——無關(guān)年齡,無關(guān)功利,唯有熱愛本身,如春風(fēng)化雨,滋養(yǎng)一生。這份“嗜書成癖”的癡,既是老人的精神注腳,亦為后世傳遞了一份關(guān)于讀書與生命的溫暖啟示。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五、結(jié)卷詩</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">五月端陽(七律兩首)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">端午節(jié)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">星移日轉(zhuǎn)又端陽,華夏文明萬古長(zhǎng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">艾草插門驅(qū)疾疫,葫蘆懸牖佑安康。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">繩纏糯粽鍋中煮,壁掛荷包屋里香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">緬念屈平身殉國(guó),龍舟競(jìng)賽祭忠良。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">祭屈原</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">汨羅河水記端陽,屈子高風(fēng)萬古揚(yáng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">抱石投江身殉國(guó),盡忠厚德業(yè)留芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">英魂赤膽地天鑒,《橘頌》《離騷》日月長(zhǎng)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">佳節(jié)黎民誠(chéng)祭奠,名垂青史放靈光。</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">主辦:律詩審稿組</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">策劃:刁柏春</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">編輯:吳華彪 陳國(guó)田</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px;">制版兼審核:陳國(guó)田</span></p>