<p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">笑綻</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">歲月駒光逝，襟前笑靨藏。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">孤行霜夜路，微漾化星芒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">尋適意</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">忙時逐夢馳，閑處賞云姿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">心守悠然處，光陰賦雅詩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">無題</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">雨驟傘難期，孤行自解頤。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">心堅生底氣，不向世人辭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">望岳寄懷</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">危峰拔地破重霄，靄霧千重袖底飄。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">半世沉浮心未改，遙將五岳攬眉腰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">望幸</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">世味非關適，人間貴在期。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">心燈明暗夜，一念即春曦。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">感懷</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">初覺溫柔性，終明素養(yǎng)成。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">笑談風雨事，心闊夢逾清。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">感懷幸福</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">幸福非他處，皆藏此刻濃。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">三餐滋味里，歲月自從容。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">生活之美</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">素箋寫就萬千章，煙火藏詩歲月香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">心守安然尋暖意，時光深處綻芬芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">笑向群山</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">風云翻涌世途艱，冷眼塵囂意自閑。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">且展豪情書壯志，笑迎風雨向群山。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">悟幸福</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">遠方綺夢總難尋，當下溫馨勝萬金。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">細品日常煙火味，從容悄入寸心深。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">微笑【寫于世界微笑日】</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">唇角輕揚意自嘉，眉間舒展綻晴霞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">千般紛擾隨風散，笑靨如花勝奇葩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">心境</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">來迎遠客意欣緣，去送流云自泰然。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">求志千般終不改，放懷萬事盡開妍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">自適</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">世路紛紜莫苦求，心隨云影任悠游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">何須強入他人戲，獨守清歡自解愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">自然之韻</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">萬物天然步自徐，耕耘默默待盈虛。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">但隨節(jié)序從容長，歲月安閑入卷書。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">心向暖陽</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">心棲霽色自晴光，漫卷詩箋拓八荒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">莫嘆流年多雨雪，眉間早種百花香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">悟世感懷</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">前緣早定功名簿，莫使欺心誤此身。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">但守光明行正道，忠良終獲善回春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">心簡</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">風恬云懶日遲遲，苔印階痕綠未癡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">莫向紛華爭色相，一甌清淺照心池。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">詠笑</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">風雨征程遠，襟懷笑意揚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">眸中融雪冷，唇畔帶春芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">陌客因之暖，愁云為爾翔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">心花開滿徑，世界共晴光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">成熟之道</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">驟雨濕征衣，孤身踏浪歸。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">不言塵世苦，唯守寸心巍。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">碎石鋪前路，寒霜淬勁威。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">倚山終是幻，自立見清輝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">隨緣行</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">緣若曇花現(xiàn)，何需執(zhí)念循。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">思多添悵惘，念久惹愁嗔。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">且守清寧意，休尋聚散因。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">心寬天地闊，淡看往來人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">感幸</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">俗累原無適，欣然有可期。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">孤舟穿浪去，遠岫破云移。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">夕照烘霞綺，晨風送鳥嬉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">襟懷藏愿景，歲歲自豐滋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">心悟</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">來逢勝景樂無邊，去踏青山意自綿。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">求道深心凝浩氣，放懷闊步向長天。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">莫因聚散生悲喜，休為盈虧嘆缺圓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">笑看人間多少事，清風明月伴流年。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">生活悟幸</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">何處覓甘飴，休言遠路馳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">朝聞鶯語脆，暮賞晚霞奇。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">陋室書盈架，閑庭月滿枝。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">平生皆小確，心暖自成詩。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">人間清曠</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">大道如瀾本自平，人間擾擾總關情。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">云霞漫卷千峰靜，心定何驚萬壑爭？</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">苔染石階凝古意，茶浮竹盞濾塵聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">等閑坐看春榮謝，襟抱長涵海岳明。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">無題</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">一路兼程未問因，襟懷坦蕩自嶙峋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">傘遮難避千般雨，足踏能開萬里春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">休訴衷腸為理會，且憑肝膽鑄精神。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">心誠巨擘擎天立，笑看云濤滌舊塵。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">悟溫柔</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">曾謂溫柔性本成，后知修為蘊深泓。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">歷經(jīng)風雨花方綻，參透炎涼意始平。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">莫嘆少年言世故，且期來日展華英。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">待將往昔悲辛事，化作時光笑語聲。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">生命之旅</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">長街燈火映行塵，歲月匆匆趕路人。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">風卷殘云尋舊夢，霜侵鬢角念前因。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">天邊雁影銜朝暮，陌上花痕染雪春。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">莫道遠方皆勝景，心藏錦繡四時新。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">悟自然之道</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">造化如詩意自長，天然萬象漫流芳。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">草依時令抽新綠，花守春秋送暗香。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">莫使機心迷本性，且拋俗慮享清涼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">閑觀物候皆成趣，靜處光陰歲月彰。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">心懷遠方</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">霽月光柔入眼眸，襟懷坦蕩自悠游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">且觀滄海千層浪，休問人間幾度秋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">墨染晨昏皆雅韻，心融悲喜盡風流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">明朝若許云帆起，直向星河最上頭。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">修心自悟</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">塵世營營困俗流，虛名累我?guī)状呵铩?lt;/span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">豈因他論評章改，不為浮名志意囚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">靜賞庭前花綻落，閑觀天際月盈休。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">且拋紛擾歸真處，獨品清歡意自悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">西江月·釋懷</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">來處花開香溢，去時云卷風輕。求之堅毅踐心盟，放下豁然隨性。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">不嘆韶光易逝，且欣歲月安寧。任他風雨任他晴，自在逍遙獨醒。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">如夢令·破局</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">驟雨忽來如注，獨向蒼茫奔赴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">莫道寂寥深，踏碎水洼無數(shù)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">休訴，休訴，心底自生津渡。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">定風波·悟</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">驟雨傾盆又若何？獨行踏浪意嵯峨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">不向世人爭曲直，心寂，任由風雨滌沉疴。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">碎石嶙峋皆作路，誰訴？胸中自有萬千河。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">拋卻注明真境界，心界，青山座座是巍峨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">江城子·悟心自勉</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">昔年錯認性溫柔。意難休。困情囚。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">歷雨經(jīng)風，方曉此中由。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">修養(yǎng)深研知底蘊，塵世路，淡閑游。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"> </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">莫于年少語悲秋。志當酬。自風流。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">且愛今朝，美好待豐收。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">待得功成回首處，歡笑里，夢悠悠。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">西江月·自渡</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">雨打衣衫透骨，風推步履如錨。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">不言愁緒自逍遙，踏碎寒星破曉。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">莫待他人撐傘，且憑肝膽成橋。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">胸中丘壑自天雕，笑看云舒云繞。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0); font-size:22px;">定風波·煙火人生</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">白麗杰</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">莫向人間問短長，此身原是客途霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">劫里風煙皆笑看，休嘆，心舟自可渡滄浪。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">不效幽篁空泣露，何苦，偏隨落絮逐炎涼。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">我有微光燃作爍，灼灼，要教星子共輝光。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">鷓鴣天·守心齋</b></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">野色蒼茫接遠天，風來云去自舒閑。苔痕暗織階前夢，竹露輕敲石上弦。 茶半盞，月盈軒，清歡何必問流年？心舟泊在澄明處，閑數(shù)星華落枕邊。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><b style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(57, 181, 74);">佳作賞析</b></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">包存賢簡析：</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">?這闋《鷓鴣天·守心齋》整體營造出清幽雅致、超然物外的意境，詞句靈動且富有韻味，展現(xiàn)出詞人對閑適生活與澄明心境的追求。下面簡要分析一下這闋詞。首先讓我們學習并欣賞一下這闋詞的上片：開篇“野色蒼茫接遠天，風來云去自舒閑”描繪出一幅開闊悠遠的畫面，廣袤的野外景色與天邊相連，一種遼闊之感展現(xiàn)在讀者眼前，而風卷云舒的自在閑適之態(tài)，奠定了全詞悠然的基調，仿佛讓人置身于無拘無束的自然之中?！疤郯悼楇A前夢，竹露輕敲石上弦”則轉為細膩的近景描寫。苔痕默默生長，好似在編織著臺階前的夢幻，賦予苔痕以動態(tài)與情思；竹露輕輕滴落在石頭上，如輕敲琴弦，以聲襯靜，營造出靜謐清幽的氛圍，充滿了詩意與浪漫。再讓我們學習并賞析一下下片：“茶半盞，月盈軒，清歡何必問流年？”詞人于室內，品著半盞清茶，月光灑滿軒室，在這種情境下，發(fā)出不必追問時光流逝的感慨，傳達出一種超脫于世俗對時光焦慮的灑脫心態(tài)，珍惜當下清歡的心境?！靶闹鄄丛诔蚊魈帲e數(shù)星華落枕邊。” 則將情感進一步升華，把心比作舟，?？吭诔纬呵迕髦?，悠然閑適地細數(shù)著星星的光華灑落在枕邊，生動地表現(xiàn)出詞人內心的寧靜與平和，遠離塵世喧囂紛擾，沉浸在自我精神世界的美好狀態(tài)。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">寫作手法：詞的上片描繪了自然景色(由遠及近)。野色蒼茫，風輕云淡，苔痕和竹露的細節(jié)處理得很細膩。下片轉到室內(由外到內)，茶和月的意象，表達出了清歡不問流年的心境，最后以心舟泊在澄明處，閑數(shù)星華收尾，這闋詞整體給人一種寧靜淡泊的感覺。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">修辭手法: 1. 采用了擬人手法，如“苔痕暗織階前夢，竹露輕敲石上弦”。賦予苔痕、竹露以人的行為動作。2. 工整的對仗，如“苔痕暗織階前夢，竹露輕敲石上弦”、“茶半盞，月盈軒”，使詞作節(jié)奏明快，富有韻律美，精準地傳達出意境與情感，體現(xiàn)了詞人較高的詞匯運用能力。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">本刊特邀點評家</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(255, 138, 0);">包存賢，通遼市科爾沁左翼中旗人，退休中學高級教師。通遼市詩詞學會、內蒙古詩詞學會、中華詩詞學會會員?，F(xiàn)任科爾沁左翼中旗詩詞工委副主任，《通遼市科爾沁區(qū)詩詞微刊》、·微刊》特邀詩評。所著作品發(fā)表于網(wǎng)刊和《通遼詩詞》、《內蒙古詩詞》等刊物。</span></p>