<p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">特別聲明：芳草園聯(lián)對(duì)集錦均得到參與成員認(rèn)可。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=28575359&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=3589e1657bd3f70ad183b44da6991e45" target="_blank">芳草</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=660512&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=6510daf54abd2627ae2696eea8668cc4" target="_blank">云朵</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=42413481&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=db1731125d427ff1d7db5fd1f379c453" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">楊柳岸</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=62057625&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=f6dd49c213697a43a663523d40f45c87" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng)</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">?</span><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=83830822&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=77aa7a65a50aa55ddd97bba03b2a77e6" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">牧羊人</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">?</span><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=215999486&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=01bdcdfc46adcabc4feaf071a68f007b" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">綠水無(wú)憂</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">?</span><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=123638888&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=62d741234107c15b6526d9dc0e5879bc" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">閑云</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=7562687&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=24af62e134b250f75ecb45074ef0071b" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">月影清風(fēng)</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">?</span><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=8773504&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=a190d29ae2eaafad7908a0f87a8a15b0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">文心</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=7599613&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=c833e2533f1822d8a61509b0ec28ac86" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">秋實(shí)</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=120859849&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=e140da7c9319cee7aff8f344114b797a" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">錢云金雨</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=652384&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=e4a42a8f947363c0495ccd727742281c" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">長(zhǎng)安山石</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=57960591&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=3371f4e581721e96e3f55909f40fec90" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">於發(fā)</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=23334970&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=4e233cdc985463247a913ed68977cd6f" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">笛里關(guān)山</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=324435478&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=28575359&uuid=167d48449115c047efdc5149e47aeb16&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=28575359&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e3ad4992996f1a3038a64b0d190f6896&um_rtc=0e1c2eca2d925bbd85adc527360d9585" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">七弦琴</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">?</span><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=63866506&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8&um_rtc=7036dd20ad9952cd2b115ea616279f17" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">蒲公英</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">?</span><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=58446201&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8&um_rtc=37c423a20b5b6e7db2de2bac0e346619" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">老六(仁義)</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">?</span><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=72140024&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">安寧</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=59488342&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">弦思</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">?</span><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=118454838&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">大海</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=57622801&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=23334970&uuid=0f28e02b19de10c5992903aee8480d95&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=23334970&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=14fbc07ad2193a2ccd16ed1c03b244f8" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">若水</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=70461024&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=70461024&uuid=8c83c8e4a566775ed9d6c69d218f60b0&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=70461024&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=89dfcb6699f1a92f4efe65f8ac2b5c70" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">松源老農(nóng)</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=169385171&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=169385171&uuid=f25830e309d241e1be5596e9d9550cfb&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=169385171&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=10c90c4fd97e0916351e4999cdecf93d" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">雨燕</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?um_rtc=e7c2f4577240717f5ec4c23ba1bd64e6&author_id=47060341&container=1&v=10.1.4" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">燕子</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=208837663&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=2a7a8f68f6217853364df3e7d0caf190&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">八哥</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=36358592&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=2a7a8f68f6217853364df3e7d0caf190&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">元其</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">?</span><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=67439235&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=67439235&uuid=302d6bb9fdbe7565d4b64a1b87fff493&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=67439235&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=0696de72d758eaa6ac947b2d382d2e5f" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">五岳樵夫</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=434621046&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=434621046&uuid=f1eac61a947394a66fd1421c07defe8a&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=434621046&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=e5d62d5b9b3d5e43d05a82db754a4105" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">過(guò)客</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=4490819&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=4490819&uuid=3477ded56f0e705e2a83b05ee793a9fb&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=4490819&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=84cf7cbec0cc8bb58ed97d4fff2907ae" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">宋</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=43288063&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=43288063&uuid=95ce0e76925f5e509acea2d632e17e23&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=43288063&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=705d407c7e08b5f1108b89f4c01e5fb5" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">?荷花</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=750939&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=750939&uuid=c97ddab4d3e07b0406b7e3d90c60be98&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=750939&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=80b48afb7a1fb1390fb6cd353bed27df" target="_blank" style="font-size:18px; background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255);">美西洋</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?um_rtc=16a18011c7eaf69f5b4606ab0971fb08&author_id=3953176&container=1&v=10.2.1" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">ANG.ZQ</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=16510940&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=16510940&uuid=384145a50bf6378fd5f4603c7a0d59c5&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=16510940&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=1045e46bc02510122459e2734cc29b69" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">?琢玉</a></p><p class="ql-block"><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=359390016&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); 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font-size:18px;">淡定</a><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=36222480&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">愚夫</a><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=22498736&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">梧桐</a><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=24752147&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">東籬月</a><a href="http://www.h-ceramic.com.cn/platform/person-column?author_id=443016337&container=1&share_to=copy_link&user_id=62057625&uuid=699474ac8c43288ddc16278a32fe0a19&share_depth=1&first_share_uid=62057625&utm_medium=meipian_android&share_user_mpuuid=c954dec171f7829687cd83793b8863e0" target="_blank" style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">華玉宇</a></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="background-color:rgb(255, 255, 255); font-size:18px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">五月十二日精彩出句</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">落葉歸塵秋事了 (問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">?</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">相思兌酒愁來(lái)飲 (問(wèn)天)?</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">?</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">飽雨花籬春色滿 (問(wèn)天)?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">首聯(lián)出句：?落葉歸塵秋事了</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">?釋義：落葉化作塵土，秋天結(jié)束了。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">出句為感懷聯(lián)，秋葉落地，物華散盡，滿眼荒涼。意味秋天已結(jié)束，從情感上講，暗含一定悲秋的凄涼。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">出句為前四后三結(jié)構(gòu)，“落葉歸塵”，選取秋天最典型的自然特征來(lái)表達(dá)秋天的結(jié)束，由于“落葉歸塵”，“秋事了”也就成了必然的結(jié)果，因此，句中前后因果關(guān)系緊密。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">聯(lián)友把握出句情感方向，結(jié)合秋天物候特征，意境深，煉字到位的佳句有：</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">??落葉歸塵秋事了</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">塞鴻啼月客愁新</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">黃花委地客心驚</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">飛鴻過(guò)境曉風(fēng)寒</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">飛霜染鬢歲華遷</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">飛鴻追日客愁生</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">寒鴉繞樹暮云收</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">寒鴉繞樹暮愁生</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">?菊花盈砌夜霜寒</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">二聯(lián)出句：相思兌酒愁來(lái)飲 </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">?釋義：我把相思兌入酒中，飲下澆愁。</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"> 出句為情感聯(lián)，“酒”、“思”與“愁”互相作用，相思成愁，愁須飲酒消減，酒須兌入相思中。但借酒澆愁愁更愁，出句最終表達(dá)出的情感走向，還是一個(gè)“愁”字。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">出句為省略主語(yǔ)聯(lián)，用了通感的修辭手法。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">聯(lián)友充分理解對(duì)句，運(yùn)用修辭手法準(zhǔn)確，對(duì)仗工整的佳句有：</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">?相思兌酒愁來(lái)飲 </span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">?</span><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">寂寞裁詩(shī)苦共題</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"> <span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">羈怨揉弦恨漫彈</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">?別恨煎茶苦自斟</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">別緒煮茶苦自嘗</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">?別緒融詩(shī)淚共吟</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">落寞融箋靜處敲</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">追憶敲詩(shī)老去吟</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">三聯(lián)出句：飽雨花籬春色滿</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">?解析：</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">飽雨：透雨，形容雨量足。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">釋義：春雨充足，盛開(kāi)的籬花帶來(lái)滿園春色。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">出句為春景聯(lián)，用飽雨籬花表達(dá)田園間的飽滿春色。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">聯(lián)友均能把握景物聯(lián)特征，選取春景，佳句頗多，不再一一列舉。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">落葉歸塵秋事了（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">鳴蛩吟月夜霜寒（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">相思兌酒愁來(lái)飲（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">羈怨揉弦恨漫彈（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">飽雨花籬春色滿（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">醺風(fēng)柳岸燕姿嬌（雨燕）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">落葉歸塵秋事了 (問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">黃花委地客心驚 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">相思兌酒愁來(lái)飲 (問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">悵望操弦別后歌 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">飽雨花籬春色滿 (問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">迎陽(yáng)葉徑翠煙浮 (笛里關(guān)山)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">落葉歸塵秋事了（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">飛鴻追日客愁生（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">相思兌酒愁來(lái)飲（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">獨(dú)坐題詩(shī)淚欲流（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">飽雨花籬春色滿（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">繞林山路鳥歌飛（弦思）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">落葉歸塵秋事了（問(wèn)天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">歸鴻銜月客心孤(美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">相思兌酒愁來(lái)飲（問(wèn)天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">別恨煎茶苦自斟(美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">飽雨花籬春色滿（問(wèn)天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">臨風(fēng)柳岸曉煙輕(美西洋)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">落葉歸塵秋事了（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">寒鴉繞樹暮愁生（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">相思兌酒愁來(lái)飲（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">別緒融詩(shī)淚共吟（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">飽雨花籬春色滿（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">輕煙籠柳畫情濃（荷花）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">落葉歸塵秋事了（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">塞鴻啼月客愁新（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">相思兌酒愁來(lái)飲（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">寂寞裁詩(shī)苦共題（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">飽雨花籬春色滿（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">籠煙山徑鳥聲幽（琢玉）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">落葉歸塵秋事了 (問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">暗蛩入戶夜霜寒（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">相思兌酒愁來(lái)飲 (問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">別緒煮茶苦自嘗（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">飽雨花籬春色滿 (問(wèn)天)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">暖風(fēng)柳岸燕聲喧（淡定）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">落葉歸塵秋事了（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">寒鴉繞樹暮云收（文心） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">相思兌酒愁來(lái)飲（問(wèn)天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">愛(ài)慕入詩(shī)怨不存（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">飽雨花籬春色滿（問(wèn)天） </span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">沐風(fēng)柳岸燕姿匆（文心）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; 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font-size:22px;">歸巢梁燕戀歌歡（元其）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">落葉歸塵秋事了 （問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">飛霜染鬢客顏憔（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">相思兌酒愁來(lái)飲（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">落寞敲詩(shī)夜獨(dú)吟（Ang.zq）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">飽雨花籬春色滿（問(wèn)天）</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">拂堤煙柳曉風(fēng)柔（Ang.zq)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">限于篇幅，選取有代表性的對(duì)句簡(jiǎn)評(píng)一二，其余對(duì)句不再一一列舉。以上簡(jiǎn)評(píng)僅代表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，因?qū)W識(shí)水平有限，難免有疏漏和不妥之處，歡迎各位師友予以指正。</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(22, 126, 251);">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">審閱：芳草 云朵 楊柳岸 朱簡(jiǎn) 鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng) 文心 笛里關(guān)山</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">組稿：</span></p><p class="ql-block ql-indent-1"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">（以投稿先后為準(zhǔn)） 琢玉 笛里關(guān)山 荷花 雨燕 元其 閑云 淡定 文心 大海 若水 燕燕于飛 弦思 老農(nóng) ANG.ZQ 震撼哥 云朵 鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng) 梧桐 美西洋</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;"> 編錄： 鄉(xiāng)間晚風(fēng)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">?</span></p> <p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">①出句為芳草老師精選集句</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block"><span style="color:rgb(22, 126, 251); font-size:22px;">②對(duì)句為師友們?cè)瓌?chuàng)</span></p><p class="ql-block"><br></p>