<p class="ql-block">出句：何處簫聲吹落霞。（流星）</p><p class="ql-block">點(diǎn)評(píng)：流星</p><p class="ql-block">參與：八九群聯(lián)友</p><p class="ql-block">美編：戀雨</p> <p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：此句為下聯(lián)，對(duì)好此句師友們要注意三點(diǎn)，斷句要看上聯(lián)來(lái)分析，單獨(dú)按下聯(lián)解讀可以有三種斷句方式。1:何處簫聲/吹落霞。前四后三句式，這樣理解前后沒(méi)有因果關(guān)系，只是交待時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，黃昏時(shí)段風(fēng)吹晚霞和聽(tīng)到不知哪里傳來(lái)的簫聲。2:何處/簫聲/吹/落霞，可將落霞理解為一首曲何處傳來(lái)的簫聲，吹的正是落霞這首曲。2:何處/簫聲/吹落/霞。如這樣理解，出句運(yùn)用了夸張的手法，簫聲把晚霞吹落了。這樣表達(dá)的意境為等人或者送人，都是可以的。沒(méi)有直接說(shuō)太陽(yáng)下山，只是通過(guò)最后哪一抹晚霞都消失了，來(lái)表達(dá)人已遠(yuǎn)，或者人未還的心情。本期一共收到64比對(duì)句，除了部分師友沒(méi)按要求提交不收錄之外。大家都按要求完成作業(yè)值得點(diǎn)贊和表?yè)P(yáng)。</p> <p class="ql-block">甲一</p><p class="ql-block">蘇淺淺</p><p class="ql-block">一簾心事縈歸夢(mèng)；</p><p class="ql-block">何處蕭聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">甲二</p><p class="ql-block">滄浪之水</p><p class="ql-block">一橋暮色問(wèn)秋水；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">甲二</p><p class="ql-block">自@陶然</p><p class="ql-block">深秋雁字捎來(lái)信；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">甲三</p><p class="ql-block">陌上桑??????</p><p class="ql-block">可堪羈客問(wèn)歸雁；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">甲三</p><p class="ql-block">馳鵬</p><p class="ql-block">云邊斷雁尋歸路；</p><p class="ql-block">何處蕭聲吹落霞。</p> <p class="ql-block">優(yōu)秀</p><p class="ql-block">星星知我心</p><p class="ql-block">清江帆影追離雁；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">優(yōu)秀</p><p class="ql-block">音花開(kāi)的季節(jié): </p><p class="ql-block">曲江柳色迎歸棹；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">優(yōu)秀</p><p class="ql-block">李尋歡: </p><p class="ql-block">天邊雁影追沉日；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">優(yōu)秀</p><p class="ql-block">清溪釣客: </p><p class="ql-block">天邊雁影征歸路；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">優(yōu)秀</p><p class="ql-block">謝子衿</p><p class="ql-block">客中霜鬢憐孤影；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p> <p class="ql-block">全部對(duì)句（多交、修改和未打標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的的未錄入，下次謹(jǐn)記規(guī)則）</p><p class="ql-block">3老墨: </p><p class="ql-block">平湖漿影驚歸鷺；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">4霜晨月: </p><p class="ql-block">兩行雁影拖殘照；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">5賈保寧: </p><p class="ql-block">他鄉(xiāng)客影悲殘照；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">8邊馬: </p><p class="ql-block">幾時(shí)鼓樂(lè)敲彎月；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">9天道酬勤: </p><p class="ql-block">此時(shí)酒興歌征雁；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">10語(yǔ)</p><p class="ql-block">滄波舟影歸漁港；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">12高歌追夢(mèng)孫寶山: </p><p class="ql-block">幾時(shí)劍影舞升月；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">13石材櫥柜: </p><p class="ql-block">誰(shuí)家淑影爭(zhēng)回首；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">14光明: </p><p class="ql-block">無(wú)邊竹海招來(lái)鶴；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">15婁東客: </p><p class="ql-block">秋江畫(huà)荻驚離雁；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">16高山景行</p><p class="ql-block">一洲蘆絮辭征雁；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">17亦學(xué): </p><p class="ql-block">幾時(shí)鶩影登紅日；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">18星星知我心: </p><p class="ql-block">清江帆影追離雁；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">19音花開(kāi)的季節(jié): </p><p class="ql-block">曲江柳色迎歸棹；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">20殘雪:花和尚的女人: </p><p class="ql-block">誰(shuí)家竹影遙望月，</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">21清風(fēng): </p><p class="ql-block">家山客夢(mèng)寄歸雁；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">22詩(shī)韻凝香: </p><p class="ql-block">此時(shí)雁字橫秋水；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">23如寶江山: </p><p class="ql-block">誰(shuí)家笛韻擾羈客；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">24馳鵬: </p><p class="ql-block">云邊斷雁尋歸路；</p><p class="ql-block">何處蕭聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">25浮云帆影（王曦）: </p><p class="ql-block">誰(shuí)家竹影驚飛鶩；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">26陌上桑??????: </p><p class="ql-block">可堪羈客問(wèn)歸雁；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">27夢(mèng)望兒（陳冠翠）: </p><p class="ql-block">此時(shí)琴韻醉明月；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">28楊梅水中人: </p><p class="ql-block">溪邊竹影搖流水；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">30殷祥光: </p><p class="ql-block">此時(shí)花閉招回燕；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">31尋找心靈家園: </p><p class="ql-block">誰(shuí)人劍影驚歸鳥(niǎo);</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">32鄧澤賢</p><p class="ql-block">一江鷺影傷羈客；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">33自@陶然: </p><p class="ql-block">深秋雁字捎來(lái)信；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">34遜雪輸梅: </p><p class="ql-block">幾回閣外聞歸雁；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲垂落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">35霞: </p><p class="ql-block">堪將雁字付秋水；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">36滄浪之水: </p><p class="ql-block">一橋暮色問(wèn)秋水；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">37棲霞</p><p class="ql-block">家山燕語(yǔ)伴春風(fēng)；</p><p class="ql-block">何處蕭聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)，風(fēng)位置應(yīng)仄。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">38竹溪</p><p class="ql-block">忽驚水岸來(lái)新雁；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">40</p><p class="ql-block">厚德載物: </p><p class="ql-block">應(yīng)知鼓點(diǎn)喚歸鷺；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">41財(cái)源廣進(jìn): </p><p class="ql-block">應(yīng)是粵韻非凡享；</p><p class="ql-block">何處蕭聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block">簡(jiǎn)評(píng)：是位置應(yīng)平。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">42溫暖的光: </p><p class="ql-block">故園鶴舞嵌斜照，</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">43蘇淺淺: </p><p class="ql-block">一簾心事縈歸夢(mèng)；</p><p class="ql-block">何處蕭聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">44牧翁: </p><p class="ql-block">我家竹影招歸雀；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">45遜雪輸梅: </p><p class="ql-block">幾回閣外聞歸雁；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">46從來(lái)如來(lái): </p><p class="ql-block">幾時(shí)棹影移歸鷺；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">47榮榮</p><p class="ql-block">此時(shí)花蕊吻飛蝶；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">48識(shí)君: </p><p class="ql-block">清江帆影掠歸鶴；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">49幸福方來(lái): </p><p class="ql-block">路邊狗吠驚升日；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">50仰望星空: </p><p class="ql-block">誰(shuí)人琴曲驚孤鶩；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">53李尋歡: </p><p class="ql-block">天邊雁影追沉日；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">53感悟: </p><p class="ql-block">此時(shí)柳影喚歸燕；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">54清溪釣客: </p><p class="ql-block">天邊雁影征歸路；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">55堅(jiān)強(qiáng): </p><p class="ql-block">天邊歸雁追明月；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">56快樂(lè)鳥(niǎo): </p><p class="ql-block">幾時(shí)柳色引歸燕；</p><p class="ql-block">何處蕭聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">57惠風(fēng): </p><p class="ql-block">天涯雁陣驚寒夢(mèng)；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">58周北強(qiáng): </p><p class="ql-block">幾時(shí)花雨送羈客；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">59謝子衿: </p><p class="ql-block">客中霜鬢憐孤影；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">60潤(rùn)中: </p><p class="ql-block">他鄉(xiāng)鼓點(diǎn)起孤鶩；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">61簡(jiǎn)而言之: </p><p class="ql-block">棧橋鷗影亂汀岸；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">62旗開(kāi)得勝: </p><p class="ql-block">誰(shuí)家槳影驚歸鷺；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">63梁海鑫: </p><p class="ql-block">山中歸鳥(niǎo)驚遷客；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p><p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block">64云天醉月:</p><p class="ql-block">誰(shuí)家帆影驚飛鷺；</p><p class="ql-block">何處簫聲吹落霞。</p>