<h3>韻前語(yǔ):</h3><h3> 雪后城鄉(xiāng)銀裝素裹,民居、田野、河流、梅影在白雪的映襯下形成一幅幅美麗的畫(huà)卷。一場(chǎng)瑞雪,一首動(dòng)情的《雪后回鄉(xiāng)感賦》調(diào)動(dòng)了邀君談詩(shī)聯(lián)群里的詩(shī)人們激蕩的情懷。紛紛臨屏用神來(lái)之筆蘸墨捻韻,詩(shī)吟盛世,歌詠芳華……</h3> <h3>原詩(shī):</h3><h3>七律·雪后回鄉(xiāng)感賦</h3><h3>文/吳幼鵬</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>夢(mèng)里家園別樣?jì)?,寒凝怎奈涌心潮?lt;/h3><h3>門前樹(shù)老猶能挺,冰面荷枯未肯消。</h3><h3>影落池塘雙刺繡,舟橫堤岸一浮雕。</h3><h3>童年趣事渾如昨,不意鄉(xiāng)愁化白描。</h3> <h3>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~</h3><h3>次韻吳幼鵬老師《雪后回鄉(xiāng)感賦》</h3><h3>~~~~~~~~~~~~~~</h3> <h1>和詩(shī):</h1><h1>王澤中</h1><h3></h3><h3><br></h3><h3>眼底家山分外嬌,猶聽(tīng)萬(wàn)物涌春潮。</h3><h3>虬松披雪彌堅(jiān)挺,修竹吟風(fēng)未頓消。</h3><h3>寫(xiě)意臘梅圖錦繡,怡情江鷺啄沙雕。</h3><h3>鄉(xiāng)愁剪剪撫今昨,詩(shī)思馳懷一筆描。</h3> <h1>和詩(shī):</h1><h1>李鳴崗</h1><h3><br></h3><h3>歲暮彤云不作嬌,炊煙幾縷逐寒潮。</h3><h3>偏村冷淡人猶到,禿樹(shù)杈枒勢(shì)未消。</h3><h3>水絕清波緣絮蓋,山橫蒼野賴天雕。</h3><h3>是誰(shuí)揮動(dòng)神來(lái)筆?又把冬容一繪描。</h3> <h1>和詩(shī):</h1><h1>鄭懷宇</h1><h3></h3><h3><br></h3><h3>漫天粉蝶翅多嬌,逐夢(mèng)翻飛卷若潮。</h3><h3>翠竹首垂腰更挺,寒梅蕊壓馥何消。</h3><h3>滿園花朵銀絲繡,耀眼欄桿玉石雕。</h3><h3>撫案臨窗難忘昨,狼毫助主用心描。</h3><h3><br></h3><h3>(另附仄韻一首)</h3><h3>潮卷江湖河岳攪,嬌姿玉蛺魂飄渺。</h3><h3>消磨松柏翠青枝,難見(jiàn)陌阡繁茂草。</h3><h3>雕繪城鄉(xiāng)錦繡圖,驚飛原野悠閑鳥(niǎo)。</h3><h3>描眉染鬢裹衣衫,一片銀光觀賞好。</h3> <h1>和詩(shī):</h1><h1>朱祥麟</h1><h3></h3><h3><br></h3><h3>樊水山橫若黛嬌,漫天飛絮卷寒潮。</h3><h3>梨花萬(wàn)樹(shù)開(kāi)尤盛,梅蕊千枝香未消。</h3><h3>筑舍臨溪鑲玉宇,捲簾推牖賞銀雕。</h3><h3>烹魚(yú)煮酒燃煤氣,樂(lè)把新村罨畫(huà)描。</h3> <h1>和詩(shī):</h1><h1>喻惠平</h1><h3></h3><h3><br></h3><h3>逐韻飛花分外嬌,詩(shī)情畫(huà)意涌心潮。</h3><h3>透窗竹影腰尤挺,落墨梅痕香未消。</h3><h3>曠野無(wú)垠銀刺繡,新居有致玉浮雕。</h3><h3>邀誰(shuí)揮舞神來(lái)筆,共與悠閑對(duì)繪描。</h3> <h1>和詩(shī):</h1><h1>李相典</h1><h3></h3><h3><br></h3><h3>年底碧空喜作嬌,遣云化雨卷寒潮。</h3><h3>童娃玩雪興尤盛,翁媼舉杯樂(lè)不消。</h3><h3>環(huán)衛(wèi)工人披凍霧,交通警察拆銀雕。</h3><h3>有誰(shuí)敢弄生花筆,請(qǐng)?jiān)诙鞚娔琛?lt;/h3> <h1>和詩(shī):</h1><h1>歐輝勝</h1><h3></h3><h3><br></h3><h3>雪漫樊湖分外嬌,思情萬(wàn)種蕩離潮。</h3><h3>院中桂柳素裝裹,屋后溪流濁浪消。</h3><h3>籬落懸絲銀線繡,田園阡陌玉龍雕。</h3><h3>客鄉(xiāng)檢點(diǎn)愁滋味,夢(mèng)伴西洲曲里描。</h3> <h1>和詩(shī):</h1><h1>王東慧</h1><h3><br></h3><h3>似絮如鹽若撒嬌,漫天遍野卷寒潮。</h3><h3>故園四處加尤厚,墻角千層積未消。</h3><h3>孫女堆成阿慶嫂,稚兒塔個(gè)座山雕。</h3><h3>更欣童伙揮鉛筆,臉上眉間畫(huà)又描。</h3> <h1>和詩(shī):</h1><h1>柯友如 </h1><h3></h3><h3><br></h3><h3>細(xì)說(shuō)家鄉(xiāng)如此嬌,山靈水秀著新潮。</h3><h3>梁湖雪集千帆隱,沼岳冰封眾鳥(niǎo)消。</h3><h3>且看仙狐追鴿影,又逢玉犬戲龍雕。</h3><h3>風(fēng)光霽月天晴后,蝶喜人歡一筆描。</h3> <h1>和詩(shī):</h1><h1>朱忠才</h1><h3></h3><h3><br></h3><h3>萬(wàn)樹(shù)梅花一放嬌,三千吳楚滾寒潮 。</h3><h3>云遮禿頂光猶閃,鴉點(diǎn)瑤池墨未消。</h3><h3>江上帆搖橫素練,道邊童趣展精雕。</h3><h3>眼前靚麗無(wú)垠錦,妙筆丹青未可描。</h3> <h1>和詩(shī):</h1><h1>汪光華</h1><h3></h3><h3><br></h3><h3></h3><h3>雪瑞梁湖若夢(mèng)嬌,梅開(kāi)兩岸逐春潮。</h3><h3>舟橫野渡絮淹隱,菊墜村籬馥未消。</h3><h3>老叟爐邊醅酒煮,稚童窗下玉冰雕。</h3><h3>憑欄四顧猶思昨,縷縷炊煙入畫(huà)描。</h3> <h1>和詩(shī):</h1><h1>張友勝</h1><h3><br></h3><h3>雪霽沼山如夢(mèng)嬌,林嵐綠漭涌松潮。</h3><h3>晨鐘暮鼓南華靜,素裹銀裝俗慮消。</h3><h3>村叟煮茶圍白炭,頑童游戲鬧冰雕。</h3><h3>詩(shī)心欲抑情難抑,漫把余程細(xì)細(xì)描。</h3>