<p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">山水田園七絕30首</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">自選2024年習作</b></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><b style="color:rgb(237, 35, 8); font-size:22px;">劉善軍</b></p><p class="ql-block">整理去年的格律習作，從涉及山水田園題材的作品中選出七絕30首，分享大家，以求指正。</p> <p class="ql-block">這些小詩大都發(fā)表于《詩詞月刊》、《新浪潮》雜志和《詩詞中國一群》、《詩壇》、《雅閣》、《邂逅詩詞》、《黃埔詩社》及《輕齡家》等微刊平臺，恕不一一詳列。</p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">冬晨</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜風帶哨凈霾塵，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">日照金山曙色新。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">竹挺梅馨枝雪落，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">啟扉野步鳥親人。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">春日村居</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">杏粉農家柳碧村，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">釆蒿挖薺近黃昏。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜談無懼晨興晏，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">喜鵲夫妻住對門。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">野菜</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">槐葉榆錢翠柳花，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">白蒿綠薺紫椿芽。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">舌尖漫品春滋味，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">浮現陳年想起家。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">吉隆坡黑風洞見蜻蜓</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">春分驚睹蜻蜓舞，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">洞府花叢幻彩虹。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">齊魯幼蛉荷角立，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">南洋老翅變阿公。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">楸花</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">又逢谷雨綻楸花，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">地潤天晴好埯瓜。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">數十年前離故土，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">依然憶舊夢桑麻。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">村叟言</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">松土平畦整壟溝，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">年年春種望秋收。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">莫愁南畝無青壯，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">留守翁婆不退休。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">小滿回鄉(xiāng)見聞</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">榴啟朱唇麥灌漿，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">聲聲布谷杏微黃。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">整齊機具聯通網，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">三夏鄉(xiāng)親不再忙。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">郊行書見聞</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">麥氣傳香喜稔豐，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">偷嘗丹杏白頭翁。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">穿林布谷聲聲脆，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蜀季花開一丈紅。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">濟南城中山</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">喜看新城奮盛威，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">昂頭闊步快如飛。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">不甘一任泉湖秀，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">絡繹青山農轉非。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夏野</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">半熟山桃墜短蒿，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">陽驕水瘦少蟬囂。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">有心飼粟鳩疑怯，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">無意驚禾兔脫逃。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">伏日野步</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">葉垂風懶倦鳴蟬，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">野徑槐花鋪玉氈。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">釣叟收綸田父歇，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">溪灣浴罷柳陰眠。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夏游黃龍</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">野曠天低遠擾囂，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">疊池幻彩競妖嬈。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">盤桓既久覺涼意，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲扯輕云護護腰。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">宿松潘川主寺</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">雪山皓首草原青，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">客醉風光主轉經。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">夜幕初垂驚走報，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">哪曾見過這多星。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">處暑</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">伏日余威蒸未央，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">微風夙夜已添涼。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">灌漿稻谷悄垂首，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">沃野山川漸換裝。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">敕勒川草原</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">背倚陰山瞰大河，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">羊肥草美笑顏多。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">何時長得氈包住，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">白馬蒙袍唱牧歌。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">包頭南海濕地</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">葦暗帆明漾淥波，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">魚嘻蓮葉逗天鵝。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">金灘健舞銀舟躍，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">滿載漁翁唱老歌。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">鄂爾多斯敖包</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">風雷難撼草原情，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">俯仰乾坤佑太平。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">更喜牧歸秋月朗，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">琴音篝火伴歌聲。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">故鄉(xiāng)晨興</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">喜鵲斑鳩爭叫早，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">繞村漫步凈無塵。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">鄉(xiāng)鄰笑臉花頷首，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">北嶺西河處處親。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">老宅即景(其一)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">一畦蘿卜半溝蔥，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">扁豆絲瓜綴滿空。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">土菜新糧中飯罷，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">葡萄架下臥如弓。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">老宅即景(其二)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">蝶飛蟻聚慢悠蟾，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">鳥憩槐蔭貓睡檐。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">菜碧花紅瓜滿架，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">隔窗夠棗品清甜。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">老宅即景(其三)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">扇舞蛩鳴待月升，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">初生貓狗比誰能。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">天河臥看流星過，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">三兩飛螢亮尾燈。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">戲題秋雨</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">細雨牛毛野籠紗，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">含煙凝翠靜無涯。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">只知急緩不知住，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">怪道人稱秋傻瓜。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">秋日山行</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">鳥鳴蝶舞艾香親，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">鷺涉蘆灣躍錦鱗。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">欲問黃花前路事，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">牽牛招手綻紅唇。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">霜降野望</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">麥綠蘆黃野換裝，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">月高日短履輕霜。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">崖楓易染先成炬，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">猶見遲歸雁一行。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">泛舟塞納河</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">初臨塞納零星雨，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">西岱盧浮淡籠煙。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">風助啟航云謝幕，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">崢嶸鐵塔湛藍天。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">瑞士風光</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">田園詩畫牧歌悠，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">少女銀峰半露羞。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">金色長龍山口過，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">琉森湖上泛輕舟。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">故鄉(xiāng)初冬(其一)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">菘青菊艷草蔥籠，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">紅柿晶瑩掛淺冬。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">風雪羈遲存暖意，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">花心猶見臥胡蜂。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">故鄉(xiāng)初冬(其二)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">未睹瓊芳應節(jié)來，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">畦頭野菊抱香開。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">田園老圃忙收菜，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">動作循時不待催。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">故鄉(xiāng)初冬(其三)</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">坡凈場光糧進倉，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">操機冬管保墑忙。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">小康老表開心話，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">真正農家不撂荒。</span></p> <p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">大雪盼雪</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">楓葉依稀松后凋，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">呼朋逐樂亦逍遙。</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">歸來猶覺少神趣，</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:20px;">假寐蕓窗夢雪飄。</span></p> <p class="ql-block">圖片取自網絡，侵刪。</p> <p class="ql-block"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);">??謝謝關注??</span></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><br></p><p class="ql-block" style="text-align:center;"><span style="font-size:22px; color:rgb(237, 35, 8);"><span class="ql-cursor">?</span></span></p>